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Sad Sides
White
You think you know me
You don't know me at all
The things you see is only a shell of me
The emotions of my life I hide
The safe to me is somewhere no one will see
The key to me is floating somewhere on a white cloud
The key and the cloud is nowhere to be found
My heart too is hard to break
You yell, you punch, but it will never give away
My heart is as white as it can ever be
I'm a visible white ghost no one notices
My black hair whipping across my face
Lonely as ever standing there, wind blowing on my delicate
skin like millions of knives stabbing and cutting me,
until I fade into nothing but dust
The things you saw me to be was not me
but not you have truly seen who I am






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tanginova
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commentCommented on: Wed May 14, 2008 @ 12:13am
sad, but good. i could just imagine the image of the girl in ur poem


commentCommented on: Wed May 14, 2008 @ 12:17am
hey schoolgrl! smile sweatdrop no, my earlier writing in the jouranl weren't suppose to be poems, it was suppose to be a story, an expressional story if u know what i mean....anyway i luv ur new poem! Inspiration alert!!! I'm now inspiration alerted, thx schoolgrl!! 4laugh



tanginova
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CherryGirlTeMe
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 01:39am
Its a beautiful poem. i can understand it completely. it is sad in a way, but completely true. do u truly feel this way? i really do wonder bout this...


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