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Unnamed Poem This is a poem I wrote recently, but I can't seem to think of a name. Can someone help me? Crying inside But no tears reveal my strife Dying inside But I continue with my life The moon casts its reflection Upon the evils of the pearl The night sky warms the heart Of the crying little girl No, this is not an emo poem. And no, it's not supposed to make sense. Can you help me pleeeeeeeeaaaaase? puppy eyes ~Kei Lawliet

Posted by: xX Celestial Moon Xx Sat May 24, 2008 @ 10:48pm

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WhatGetsYou0ff
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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 10:30pm

Id help but im a complete idiot and cant even begin to comprehend this poem.

xX Celestial Moon Xx
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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 10:58pm

i dont quite understand it myself *laughs* the moon and the pearl represent truth and lies (a pearl is often referred to as a kind of a "false moon" wink , and the girl, who couldn't turn towards the light to save her, is instead comforted by the darkness. it's basically a poem about how bad things can seem, and finding comfort in the things that a person normally wouldnt find comfort in, if that makes any sense sweatdrop

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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 11:24pm

Not really... well, kinda i guess. Seeing as you simplified it for me razz

Remember...the lights are on but nobody's home O.o

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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 11:42pm

yea. this poem is pretty meaningless now that i think about it. i'd delete the entry, but i'm to lazy to do that now.

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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 11:49pm

NOOOOO!

I didnt say I didnt like it!!! crying

xX Celestial Moon Xx
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Tue May 27, 2008 @ 11:56pm

i know u didnt. i dunno, it just seems really strange to me now for whatever reason. i'll leave it up, though 3nodding

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