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derp, what? capturing the spontaneity of my life. 8D


criseldt
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Summer and Emo
My summer's the asian summer. sigh. livin the asian summer. stare
i was reading this magazine and now I have strong notions beckoning me to the world of literature and art... so inspired. So here's one of my failed attempts:

In the darkness
Sitting in the darkness
waiting for some light
But alone I stand in that world
unable to fight.

My life's just been disastrous
My entrance was cataclysmic
Everything I do is rejected
Is there any use of me?

I just tried doing right
expecting praiseworthy admiration
but instead Fate turns against me
turning everyone else, too.

As my life goes on
Slipping deeper into this darkness
Everything fades away
out of reach, avoiding me.

I am isolated,
away from the regular world
shut away in this mental prison
indisputably hell.

All my thoughts
are jumbles of pictures
from my past
and of my hurt.

Please someone pull me out.
Someone, anyone!
I can't bear alone in this darkness
In this darkness called high school.


sigh so emo. but writing about emo stuff is slightly easier for me.





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Porybows
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 07:23am


its good.
but kinda cheesy...
like
you use terms everybody uses
copycat?? sorry not meant to hurt sweatdrop
heart u anyways!!


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