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What the point of Ever trying to find Happiness, when its the conquest for Happiness that makes you miserable
Ode To Joy (Fiction Story)
This is a fiction story that I have made up. It has nothing to do with real life, or real life interactions. I will try not to use my friend's names, but if I can't think up a name I will use your name. If your name is used in the story, your character does not reflect how I think or feel about you in real life. I am thinking of entering this into the arena when the Fiction Story Arena comes out. Please rate.
Thank You.

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Hello, my name is Taylor, I am a 14 year old freshman in Highschool. I live in Portland Maine, and this is the story of how I became where I am today. As I awoke one moring I felt very cold. I got out of bed an got dressed, I prepared my bag, and started to head out the door to leave for school. Before I opened the door, my mother had reminded me to put a sweater on, for obvious reasons. I went out the door. I quickly stepped back in and slammed the door shut. "Jesus!", I screamed. Quickly my mother asked what was wrong. I told her that it had been snowing very heavily outside. She opened the door, and then it was nothing but an average fall day. I started walking to school, I thought back to the blizzard type weather, and guessed that it was just my head. I got to school, and met up with my friend John. "Hey John," I asked, "You got any Asprin or something like that on you?" He said yeah, and gave me a couple. The bell rang, and we went to our classes. My first class was math. I hated it, the teacher was a total weirdo, if you know what I mean. Halfway through the class I became lightheaded. I asked Ms. Pickford, my math teacher if I could go to the nurse. She said yes, I got up and started to walk. I got halfway down the hall, before I lost the feeling in my legs. I passed out cold. I am pretty sure I was lying there unconscious for a good 15 minutes before my friend Ellen came along and found me. When I woke up I was in an ambulance. Everything was fuzzy. I was only able to tell who was there by their voices. Only a couple of doctors, John, and my mom were there. I had no idea what was going on.

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The next chapter will come out sometime this week






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Master_oF_Dr3mz
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:15am
3.5 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:16am
wtf's it about anyways? a superhero story?



Master_oF_Dr3mz
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Maichimonji
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:18am
thank you chris. oh and no, tis a story about a kid who starts having the delusions, and he ends up having a problem. I don't want to reveal it all now. oh for everyone else the rating system is 5stars. 5 being highest 0 being lowest


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:33am
0 xp
cause you spelled "ode" wrong. idiot



The Evil Oreo
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Maichimonji
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:35am
there are two different spelings


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:39am
nope, actually it's "Ode"



Master_oF_Dr3mz
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Maichimonji
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:42am
i figured that out 10 seconds ago


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:44am
Haha, I was right. Idiot



The Evil Oreo
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Maichimonji
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 04:47am
okay, now no more comments unless your rating.


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 12:35pm
It's good...bout a 3.5, though.

@april: stop being a smartass. he spelled it correctly. look it up.


proof



Brigid FTW
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 09:10pm
@ Brigid: well for your information, before you came, he spelled it "oad". He then changed it. So you should shut the hell up before jumping to conclusions


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 07:12pm
Yeah! Jesus! You'd jump off a bridge to prove a point for Kane xd April is right. 3nodding He spelt it "Oad"



Master_oF_Dr3mz
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Maichimonji
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 04:11am
I did spell it oad.
and chris, go to hell stare


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 15, 2008 @ 03:02am
no, why don't you? You are the one who wants to die right? stare I was only baking April up because Brigid called her a smartass for no reason.



Master_oF_Dr3mz
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 15, 2008 @ 03:06am
thats not why, I said go to hell


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 15, 2008 @ 03:35am
@Chris and April: Meh bad. sweatdrop



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