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Forsaken (epilogue poem to my short story The Heartless) Left alone in darkness I am lost in pain Accompanied by distress I have nothing to explain I would be lonely If I could only feel I look around madly I wonder if this is real I reach into emptiness And try to grasp the air I am left in loneliness To wallow in my despair I am here because I sin I am here because I bled There is nothingness within This is where I go when I'm dead.

Posted by: Craftiest Wed Jul 16, 2008 @ 09:57am

We are nothing like God.
Not only do we have limited powers,
but sometimes we are driven to become the devil himself.

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Commented on: Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 07:19pm

Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 07:06am


	Again the same dark feeling. I love poems like this. It is very real...which is something I havnt been able to find. It really makes me want to read more of your work.

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