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just peoms and feelings is all. like wat i feel wen in sad happy in love or sum other emotional s**t enjoy
POEM: My own hell
As the moon rises your mesmerizing voice resounds in my head
I close my eyes and the music plays
A sweet serenade as I lie down in bed
I fight to find you resting at the end of this maze
But upon my approach you only fade away
Left to wonder if I may see you another day
Every night have I seen this dream
Such bliss that for nightfall I could not wait
Entering my mind in such a heavenly stream
But never was I able to hold your hand
Eventually It began to eat away at my heart
The world stands against me, or so it may seem
From the start you were a dream
In the end a nightmare
Your serenade now a scream
My breathing grows heavy
My love was my disease
This is not the comfort I once felt
Now I lie trembling in this lonely cell
Accompanied only by my own merciless despair
Welcome to my private little hell






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OcToBeR PhEnOmEnOn
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 11, 2009 @ 10:49pm
You write beautiful poetry. I was just like you, really. Letting my love eat at me inside. Feeling like everything was dark, no one cared. I felt like a stranger in my own home. If you can call it "Home." But I found someone who loves me. She hasn't been born yet. Im not pregnant, but i feel like i know my daughter already. Its complicated. I hope your life gets better. I mean that with all the sincerity in the world.


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