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ok i did this for class work and if u can make corretion to the poem for english class.

Love

Love is like a flower
It is as beautiful as a rose

It is as soft like a petal
Yet it painful as it thorn

It is as red as a valentine
But more gorgeous than other flowers

The petal will wilt, the rose may die
But I will always love you

Ok here another one for english class.

Darkness

Dark cold areas
All around you
Running through the dark
Kindness is
No where around you
Every where you go
Scary things happen to you but
Sadly it only a bad dream






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Betch Cant Touch This
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 01:16am
I luff it! luff it lots


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 01:17am
so u think it ok?



Hatsuharu-chan
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forbiddin
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 02:14am
aaaaawwwww ish soooo adorible loveable!
*huggles victoria-chan close to him* I love it.. very much heart


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 02:16am
*huggles him back and kisses him ont he lip* heart



Hatsuharu-chan
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Phoenix Slayer
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 22, 2005 @ 12:26am
Hey don't forget to thank the person who helped you with that xd


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 22, 2005 @ 12:33am
yes yes i know i know. thanks u chris.



Hatsuharu-chan
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 22, 2005 @ 01:13am
*smiled @ both @ them* ^_^


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 22, 2005 @ 01:26am
*goes and huggles ryan*



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