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Cut-an unfinished song by me. comment...
All I need is one little knife
A few more cuts wont end my life
I'll let my blood spill away
my pain...

Dripping slowly, scarlet thread
Down my arm it fades away
It seems that what I'm doing
has no effect

I'm numb now
Nothing that I do, helps now
Shaking, I drop the knife, to the ground
I'm numb now

Hack away at all the pain
Desperatly wish it'd go away
Let your blood flow freely, again and again
Just a slit isnt enough
Deeper for me wont help that much
Let your blood flow freely, from that cut






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SWEETfaerieAngel
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 08, 2008 @ 11:32pm
>,<

I like the rhymey parts.

:3 I also like the love the way you used a metaphor, and compared
the blood to a scarlet thread.

<3


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