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Hmmm...Just random writings I suppose.
Forsaken
The following is an excerpt from a story I have recently wrote. Please comment:
As I lay there on the rough pavement, rain drops streaming down my blood stained face only one thing crossed my mind: Do you love me...? It didn't take long for me to realize that I would die, the wounds overflowing with blood as I lie helplessly upon the pavement. The girl of my dreams screamed into the hollow night, crying desperately for me to stay alive, praying for a miracle that just wouldn't happen. I can say that I longed to be at her side, for I truly did, but I wasn't going to get what I wanted, only in fairy tales will you ever get what you wish for. There is no God...But there is most definitely a Devil...Welcome to my nightmare.



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KungFuCaribou
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  • [10/27/08 02:19am]

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    germanicus2
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jan 26, 2009 @ 01:15am
    It has a noire quality to it.


    commentCommented on: Mon Apr 06, 2009 @ 04:54am
    wow...good smile



    TempestHeart92
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    cute_sheepies23
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    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 26, 2009 @ 03:41pm
    It's very well written. I'd like to read the rest of your story sometime. ^_^


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