so yeah see the title...its a tad depressing..to others not ot me really...
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A stranger walked past
A dark alleyway
To see a young girl
All covered in grey
Her hair was ashen
Her clothes torn
Her hair matted
Her body scorned
The stranger ran
To her aid
He mended her wounds
To make sure she was okay
She thanked him and then
He helped her agin
And took her place
In the land of grey
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So yeah in case you couldn't tell. its the ghost of the girl that died in the alleyway. A man tries to help her thinking she is alive and she kills him and replaces his soul wih hers so she can live again.....okay mabye it is depressing...but anyway critism is wanted
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