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Beyond Aura
its a book im working on, ^^

This takes place in the online virtual game: The World

She looked down at the pixel-like dirt. The tree she placed herself under was a little too noticeable. There was only that one tree in the whole town of Ma-Req. Everyone who passed took a small glint at the tree, or course, why would they not? To see the girl in white, the *AI of The World. Aura, is her name. She looked up, noticing two boys approaching her. One boy was a *long arm, the other a *heavy axe. Both with perplexed looks on their faces. They stopped two paces away from her, the long arm spoke first. "Girl, why are you so diffrent? Do you even have a weapon? What level are you, are you even a *PC?" Then the heavy axe man spoke, "Yes, why is your character so diffrent from ours, or from anyone else's here! Is it some kind of cheat?" Aura gave a cofused look, they bundled her with so many questions at one. Fumbled, she replied "I am...Aura.." Immediatly, the two boys' faces grew with fear etched on them. "A-Aura..?!" The long arm sputtered out, "your.....a-aura?!" Aura gave a slight nod, and looked down, escaping the two boy's gaze. The two boys, with out a second thought, ran with out heed.
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With a sigh, she walked away, having the sence of many eyes watching her every move as she muttered "why was i created.." with the painfull feeling of sorrow and lonelyness in her head.
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VOCAB:
AI: Artificial Intelegence, a thing not real that learns on its own through human interaction
Long Arm: A class of weaponist in The World
Heavy Axe: A class of weaponist in The World
PC: Player Character



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    vvars
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    commentCommented on: Sun Nov 23, 2008 @ 04:21am
    awe1 i love .hack! this seems like a nice addition to it, except, aura seems diffrent in this story. cant wait to read the next page!!!!! :lD


    commentCommented on: Sun Nov 23, 2008 @ 04:24am
    p.s. did you draw that????????? DDDDDAMMMMMMMN!!!!!!!! DRAW ME SOMETHING, AURA!



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