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~*Please tell me what i should improve or opinions on what could make this story better...Thank you*~

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Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 07:56pm

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	Chapter 10 Preview! (THIS IS JUST A PREVIEW!!THIS TXT MIGHT BE CHANGED!) Chapter 10-Dark Void Yawnnn....it must have been like 5 am or 3 at least. I grabbed my cell phone and looked at the time. 6:20 am. Figures. Its the time i usually always wake up. I couldnt help but wonder if Jamie and Austin made it back safe.I cracked my neck on both sides. I really got a crick from riding on that bike last night. I turned sideways out of my bed and looked straight at the ground. Ughh it didnt want to get up.but i guess i had to..

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Tue Apr 07, 2009 @ 09:10pm

Hi, have just finished reading your stories.
They are actually quite good, you have a few spelling mistakes, but that happens when you get caught up in a story. Love the plot, it makes you wonder, what is going to happend nexst. It's a good thing because it's importent always to leave your audience wanting more. So just keep on writing, and one day, who knows, maby your name will be on a book.
Have fun writhing, and don't let other opinions bother you just focus on the good stuff, and try to do someting about the bad stuff, if you cant or don't want to just ignore it. But most importantly: don't let other peoples apiniences ruin you.
Hope to hear more soon smile
Have fun writing, and good luck.

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