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Victimites of Love
Victimites of Love



Deep down inside your heart
It's branded in to stain
The name of who'll be your "killer"
The one you will proclaim

They'll squeeze your heart, until it hurts
And, as their hand tightly grips
They'll suck the air right from your lungs
With a meeting of the lips

A touch will leave you defenseless
A caress will cloud your mind
And by looking deep into their eyes
There's a chance you may go blind

Also, when this person speaks
Your ear will start to go deaf
Except to the words that they have to say
All other sounds will have left

Now, I'm not sure how to explain this
And I know it may sound queer
But, despite your senses acting up
You simply do not fear

You tell yourself that you like your killer
And, with all that was done, it's not lie
They will take your heart and hoist it high
And, in love, you will surely die

Japan Underground ™
Paul Peterson ©2009






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Lady Kittens
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 12, 2009 @ 09:37am
I love poetry;o
But it looks like you love it more.
smile
Ive written quite a few>_<
They are trash compared to yours.


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 15, 2009 @ 01:57am
From the title, I expected something different. Beautiful, nonetheless. Utterly true. I believed it would be about the conciquences of love, a subject I know far too much about. Again, beautiful. Keep writing! heart



Apollonis
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