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Im going to start an RP. This is how the first post will look like. Its called, RPBG: the fighters dream. Any suggestions? Please tell me what could be better, and how could I make it better?

Rules:
1. No cursing.
2. No swearing.
3. Follow all of Gaia's rules.
4. No killing.
5. No one hit KOs. Make your rp interesting.
6. Make sure you clarify if your talking about the RP or not.
7. No perverted stuff.

Story:
Some where in a "Galaxy far, far away" (-Star Wars. Heh, heh) There is a huge tournament that is held once a year for fighters all over the galaxy to come to. People train day after day, so they can earn the title, "Supreme Fighter of the Universe." (This story is not that great. I am open to any and all suggestions to make it better. This is a temporary story.)

Objective
The whole reason I created this RP is so that people could use their imagination to the fullest, and expand upon it. The reason the theme in this RP is fighting is because, well, I like fighting video games the best. This is my first thread on Gaia, so sorry for the inconvinience. You should know when your beaten. You cant win every battle.

Create your character:
Gaian Name:
Character Name:
Race:
Weapon:
Element:
Fighting Style:
Signature Attack(s): (this is optional)
Appearence: (If you have a picture of your character, put it as a link. Not as an image, you could describe how your character looks if you dont want to put a picture.)
Short Bio: (This doesnt have to be a long story. Just describe how your character is. You could put a story to it if you want, you just dont have to.)

Example:
Gaia Name: NeoPaladinOfLight
Character Name: Neo Paladin of Light
Race: Angel
Weapon: Heaven's Blade.
Element: Light
Fighting Style: Some what similar to the DBZ fighting style, but more like Kingdom Hearts.
Signature Attack(s): Silent Soul Divide, Celestial Slash, and Holy Dragon Blaze.
Appearence: Neo Paladin of Light.
Short Bio: Many years ago, a brave and noble warrior battled the forces of evil in God's name. One day that warrior fell, but the God of all grace spared his life. He sealed that warrior's soul in his sword, knowing that he would be needed again. Now the time has come for that warrior to rise again. That warrior's soul has been awakened to fight the forces of evil again. He is a calm fighter, his personallity could be better. He is not mean, in fact he is everything but mean. He is just quiet and calm.