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It's Not My Fault Drip Drop Drip Drop That's the only sound now But that's not all I hear. I still hear my struggle My "no's" and "don'ts" muffled because your hand was over my mouth The taste of your fingers Salty because of your sweat You're sweaty because of me I'm the hardest victim you've had But you still kept going on Forcing yourself into me Not caring if you happen to tear and damage me You hurt me But did I cry? No because then you would think I was giving up the fight I'd never give up And now you know that Because your dead That was your mistake You brought the gun Just in case you don't give me what I want You said that And I wanted freedom So I used your gun Please don't be mad It's your own fault Just like it was my fault you raped me So I'm sorry that your blood is dripping onto the floor making a puddle But, It's not my fault

Posted by: spashleyluver13 Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 10:34pm

~To Write Love On Her Arms...
Renee's Story is now yours and mine~

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sam151_is_gone
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Commented on: Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 10:48pm


	awww thts sad and awesome i really liked it uses gun bam!!!!

Commented on: Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 10:49pm


	I like the omatopoeia at the beginning. Your rhetorical question "But did I cry" means that you are strong which is cool. It's a poignant tone, but I still like it

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Commented on: Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 10:54pm

Commented on: Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 11:47pm


	that was very strong. i really liked it. good job!

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Commented on: Sat Feb 14, 2009 @ 12:03am


	Very powerful. Strong. Don't give up. Don't let them control you. Very good.

Commented on: Sat Feb 21, 2009 @ 05:12pm


	O my gosh! i've never read any of your stuff, i don't think.... maybe i have..... i don't know, but that was flipping amazing!!!! RAAR, I don't have a signature! Mwahahaha! oops...

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