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Chapter 1: The dream

In my mind I knew I was dreaming. There was something odd about this dream though. Here I was standing on a wobbling ship. Except this ship looked abonded. Crates were cracked open, lying in the open. Nothing was held inside. No busy crew members were seen at all helping the ship while the nasty storm beated the old boat. I walked carfeully to the side of the ship looking into the dark waters. A storm was brewing up ahead and I knew that this ship might as well sink. As I stared deep into the waters with concentration, there was something down there deep into the ocean. As bright lightning striked the opposite side of the ship, the bolt's power shoved me straight into the sea. Something was terribly wrong. I dived in with a deep plunge, freezing water burrying into my face. Shaking and coughing, I was underwater except the wierd thing was that I was able to breathe. Confused, all I can think right now was just the word, amazing. Why was it amazing? Underwater I see a clear vision of the sea. There were bright neon seas of fish swarming past me. There to my left, a porcupine fish came up to me. This is wierd. Am I still dreaming? The bubbles in the sea looked real. The water I was swimming in felt like real water. Something must be wrong. How am I suppose to get out. My hands were numb from the icy waters but I managed to move my hand fast enough, punching my stomach! I must be out of bed now getting ready for school. But that didn't happen. I was still in the sea. I punched and kicked my feet together, pulled my hair, pinched myself and nothing worked! This means I was stuck in this dream! How am I suppose to get out? Out of nowhere a sea creature flashed past me. Then another one. And again. I knew what was happening. A shark with razor sharp teeth appeared. I was surrounded by gargantuan great white sharks! I didn't care! I knew these sharks will kill me! Thats what mattered now! This dream needed to have an ending or I will be dead soon!

Note from the editor emrldfuruba_cdw: There were some mistakes in this which i had to fix! Awesome story!

From the author venicedoll: I hope you enjoyed this chapter! I will try to write a second chapter soon!! Lots of my friends says I'm a good writer but I don't believe so. Thank you my editor for putting up with the mistakes! ^-^





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