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First Thing (WrittenByMe)
Wake up. First thing is you.
Go to sleep. First thing is you.
My chest sinks at the sound of your voice.
Unexplained, these feelings. Explain them to me.
Your touch. Your eyes. What more could I want?
You go away. Not even for a second. I feel incomplete...
First thing is you.
Just call my name and I'll be there to hold your hand.
Call my name... even a murmur... just call my name.
These feelings overwhelm me.
So unexplained. Can you explain them?
I just need you. Here and now, for the distance it pierces me.
With out that piece of you... I just...
With out that piece of you I just can't feel right.
Explain them to me and settle what's troubling me.
Wake up. First thing is you.
Go to sleep. First thing is you...
Wake up. Go to sleep. First thing is you.©
-Jeremey






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kinkeh-lollipop
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 29, 2009 @ 07:50pm
I like the simplicity of it.
Really nice repetition at the end, biggrin
heart heart heart


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