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A bullet to the heart
I never saw it coming;
Thats how it usualy goes
wen a broken heart is born

I saw it coming,
but like all people in love I was blinded
stupidity took over my brain and obsetion became my game

I didn't come here to play the blame game
only time and speed are at fault.
The time you took and the speed I went

nevertheless I did not expect to be destroyed like this,
A bullet straight at my heart,
it was not ment to be a bullet but an arrow the little cherub had trown

I see now that your heart no longer belongs to me,
but it would have been better to have been told
than my finding out on my own

A bullet to the heart is what I call it.
An invible bullet that leaves no visible scar
it bleeds and bleeds untill theres no love left

Sadly this scar is going to bleed for a long time






User Comments: [3]
the last warrior5
Community Member





Wed Jun 10, 2009 @ 01:16am


whoah sofi verry deep yet so meaningfull(like always) i love ur poetry good or bad happy or sad realistic or unrealistic is gourgeos


Tito el osito
Community Member





Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 07:17pm


Whover this is refered to that person would loose trust in almoust everyone, he/she woul have doubts of him/her self and wont be able to talk of his/her feelings. In time he/she will think life is pain or the he/she can live with but there would be a time were the pain can afect the emotions and probably his/her caracter. He//She might be with pain or without the pain in years but his/her trust would take longer and at the same time the way to expres his/her feelings.

Nice poem by the way razz it makes one think of a lot of things neutral


gaaralove6394
Community Member





Mon Sep 07, 2009 @ 02:20am


Your poem is really good... I'm not such a b***h in person... Just a lil defensive... You should really make poetry books you would make tons of money!


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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