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The story..... so far
uhh i do anything and put anything even a storyline from one of my incomplete book if i want to
preview of the story
okay this is a preview k like fist excerpt


"warning warning warning"the alarm blared as we all rushed out to the field. chaos filled the bloody battlefields, when i came out i breathed the cold deathly air then bullets whirred past my head "ahh s**t get down now"as i screamed to my team mates but it was too late my squad of two died right when they started, i ran behind a boulder for cover "damn what the hell are these things" i screamed into the intercom as explosions where set off into the field "comm...der......these...re...th..conrols....very..stile...enemy"the communications had been cut off. "hey hq hq can you read damn..."as i looked around to see what i have "damn i hope this is enough" i came out running into the field trying to kill at least one of these strange freaks from hell, as i turned around to see if im clear one had shown himself out of thin air "holy s**t..."i screamed, right then and there i saw what it looked like a very gruesome creature it has horns like the goat its body reeks of something or someone that diedits entire body is as pitch as the night himself and its eyes glowed a bloody red, as i feel back i had heard a gunshot from right behind me "headshot"the random stranger said,as i saw the creature's head blown up right before my eyes "hey there i thought you need help"the man came walking towards me and picked me up "you know what shake shut up"(shake was my comrade in the field we fought together in battle we were friends since day one) "come one you know you missed me "we told me as we ran behind the same boulder "are you ready my friend ?"i asked shake"ready as i'll ever be kaen"he nodded in approval then we both started to blast our way out into the the enemy fortress, then suddenly a loud voice came out "okay kiddos your done here"we both took off our helmets "im glad you enjoyed our simulations "it was my father david sr. it was all a simulation "ahh that was great sir"i told my father"yeah it was a blast"shake said


okay that was your preview and yeah a simulation woot so comment and seeif its good





 
 
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