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This is a poem, took me forever to write and still sucks! I was there in the daylight. The son was shinning so bright. Then all of a sudden. There was a cloud beggining to appear, we were all sad even my mom most dear the kids were all sad they stopped their cheer. and I could not believe the end was so near for I havent even grown a beard, as the hurrican came closer, everything was gone, exept the for the beer, oh wait there comes hillbilly's, I guess I was wrong. now everthing was gone, nothing in sight as the sun came up "oh where were you last night?!"

Posted by: desonator shikamaru Sat Dec 31, 2005 @ 03:26am

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jayjaywalls
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Commented on: Sun Jan 01, 2006 @ 02:21am


	i like it mrgreen .........lol

Commented on: Sun Jan 01, 2006 @ 02:05pm


	ya but I couldnt think of a rhyme for sudden gonk

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__CantStopMe__
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Commented on: Thu Jan 05, 2006 @ 05:02am


	it does not suck!!!! i say its good

Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 03:44am


	You should of rhyme, like this: Flying Like a bird In the sky Looking down At the ground See the town. -Sam O'Neil I got it of google.

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xx_Zara_Blingz_xx
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Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 08:50pm


	u made a mistake: the son was shinning so bright sun**

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