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A New Poem... Entry?
So... The Other Entry Is Really Old And I Havent Updated It In Forever... So I'm Making A New One... I Only Have One Poem Right Now And Iv Showed It To Some People Already... Hahaha.... But Anyway, I'll Add More When I Feel Like Writing. Cause.... If I Just Try To Write One And Im Not Like In The Mood To, It Turns Out Like Retarded Crap. That Happened With Some Of My Others. Like This One I Wrote About A Duck... Hahaha. I Wont Even Post That One. Anyway, Here's My Newish Poem.







~Drowning~


I'm Sinking Down.
My Head Between My Knees.
I Don't Want To Drown.
Oh Baby, Please.

Your Hand On My Head.
Let Go, I Need Air.
Soon I'll Be Dead.
And You Dont Even Care.

Why Are You Doing This?
What Have I Done To You?
Was It That Last Kiss?
Am I Now Not Good Enough To Do?

You Push My Head Down More.
I'm Done, Out Of Breath.
My Heart Is So Sore.
I'm Ready For Death.

I Still Want To Know Why...
But I Need To Leave, Good Bye.
One Last thing To Do.
I Need To Say, I Love You.


Deaf Schizophrenic Cookie
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  • User Comments: [3]
    MasterRevolver
    Community Member





    Sat Aug 29, 2009 @ 05:34pm


    wow that was dark but AWESOME! u have a knack for poetry =3


    Amaz1ngGr4ce
    Community Member





    Sat Aug 29, 2009 @ 08:33pm


    Less than three! It's awesome!
    On a completely unrelated, I hope you can do pushups; you're probably getting some on Monday.


    Someday someone may kill you with your own weapon, but they should have to beat you to death with it because it is empty.
    noknis
    Community Member





    Fri Sep 25, 2009 @ 11:24pm


    Oooh, IM DROWNING IM DROWNING
    BAHH


    User Comments: [3]
     
     
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