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A Dreamer's wishes...
Choose Me
Here's a poem I wrote...I'll try and post all of my poems lol...tell me what you think! ><

To be with you forever, that is my bliss

Through all my years of loving, I never imagined love like this

All my cares and emotions, all my hopes and dreams

Seem to take form when I look at you, In your arms my heart takes wing



My dear, do you see? Can you feel?

How my eyes sparkle? How my heart heals?

In your embrace, the world disappears

Your kiss is sweet, it erases my fears



You are my Romeo, my darling prince.

I saw you, felt you, and have loved you since.

I am the Sun that has been consumed by the moon.

Does it surprise you that I loved you so soon?



Our love is as constant as the stars above.

As bittersweet as the cry of the mourning dove.

I have been gentle, patient, and kind.

Now, will you please make up your mind?



You tell me you love me so very much.

That you want me, love me, and long for my touch

So, let me be yours and yours alone.

Let me be the one to make your voice moan.



I have dreamed since I met you of being your bride.

To speak the binding vows, to be forever by your side.

Even as I speak these words, my cheeks turn a scarlet red

Will I be the one to wake beside you in bed?



I want to let love grow and awaken with you…

To make love and bear your children too

My heart is speaking, can you hear?

As my love deepens, it also causes fear



Will you choose me? Be mine forever?

Kiss me, hold me, be my sweet lover?

I truly hope you do, because I can’t see

How to, without you, continue being me…



You opened my heart, you hold the key.

After another broke it and just couldn’t see.

How much love I possess for the person I choose.

So this time, I simply refuse to lose.



I am done asking, answer me, love…

Will we be together forever, here and in heaven above?

I chose you, I feel this love is right…

So please, please! Love me and hold me tight!






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ObligationtoMercy
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 29, 2009 @ 06:32pm
I'll make a response to that...

Usually I'm good at making poems...


If there is a lust that fills your mind,
but no to ought, but discovered,
living within my eyes and into your eyes,
it is but a blissful moment,
sharing those precious, yet simplistic moments,
a reason for love to go fonder,
a rise in detail,
but none shall morn your disappearance,
As you leave,
I shall go with,
Only the discovery is our own.


I got bored.... Hope you like my short poem. Nice work on yours.


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 30, 2009 @ 09:04pm
It's wonderful. ^^



ajes
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