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chapter 1 part 1/3
*before i start i would like to thank all who read this for doing so, i also sorta forgot to write what the main character looks like so ill interupt the story some where and explain it from ur pal alienman33*
Part 1/3
"My name is shiro koski. I was 15 when I died, so let us start the stroy there."(2 weeks earlier) shiro was goofing around with the only few friends he has and he challenges them to a race to his house. Now isnt the strongest but he is fast. So as he storms of his friends are quick behind him trying to catch up to him. Shiro isn't a normal teenager he has a semi-weak 6th sense, he is able to feel the presence of certain spirits but not able to see them. So shiro looks back to see how far his friends were behind him and he wasn't watching where he was going and as he turned his head to the side he noticed a train right next to his face. As his friends screamed in terror as they saw the train hit where shino was standing. As they got to the train the saw shino's shoes on the ground. As one of his friends named kim kneeled to the ground crying holding the shoes." I-I-I really liked him!" she said as she sobbing. As the train finally passed they looked up in surprise to see shiro on the ground, his eye wide filling up with tears. he had a look of fear on his face. kim ran over to him and hug him. He pushed he away and ran sobbing to his house. He ran into the house yelling for his parents,"MOM DAD YOU THERE?" as he stumbled into the kitchen he notice a note on the fridge," Hey hun me and your father are going to take a week or two off to relax from work. We left you more then enough money for you so see you when we get home. XOXOXO love you Mom and Dad" As he sighed in a deppressing way he crumpled up the the letter and threw it into the trash can and said under his breath," I have no parents." Shiro then lumbered to his room. shiro flopped onto his bed and stared at the cealing he lifted his hands and just examened them his sight slowley blurred and his eyes started to get heavy and he passed out from exaution. He woke up the next day in a cold sweat his eyes wide, breath and heart rate racing. he stumbled to the bathroom and looked long and hard into the mirrior. He then got his towels and turned on the cold water for his shower. Shiro opened the glass door and stood there in the cold water and let his mind drift. Shiro started to mummble something under his breath his skinning turning red and starting to blister. The mummbling be came louder and louder til it was almost screaming. He kept repeating the same thing over and over again as thou he was under a trance," fire...fire....FIre....FIRE....FIRE!" Shiro jumped out from the shower his skin steaming as thou he was in scoulding hot water. He put his towel on and headed for the bathroom door, but he hesitated for a moment he slowley moved his hands toward the door nob, as he turned the nob and opened the door he flinched and had a sudden feeling to scream. he refrained him self from doing so. he got dressed and called his docter to make an apointment so that he can see the blistering skin. So he left for the docter, as he got to the docter's office the first thing to leave the docters lips were" dear god what in the world happened to you?" shiro's head kinda tilted to the side and as his mouth opened he just moved his lips and didnt say anything as thou he was spacing out. The docter walked over to shiro and snapped his fingers a few times saying," Shiro....Shiro are you okay?" shiro jerked back and said in a clueless manner," what just happened doc?" "well it seems you blanked out for a second right before you were going to tell me what happened." "Thats right okay, so I was taking a cold shower when my mind started to drift just like it did a second ago and when i came threw i was covered in burns." the docter examined shiro and said," i don't know what is wrong with you to tell ya the truth so here is what im gonna do, I believe that this may not be physical but psycological so here is a good shrienk that should be able to help you out." "thanks doc, i'll see ya soon" As shiro left the office he made an apointment for the shrink and started to head over...

*thank you all for reading this long first part of this chapter now im going to tell you what shiro lookes like he has a long boney figure with dark red hair and blue eyes and he likes to wear alot of black clothing. now that is all for now and please show this to your friends, chao mrgreen *





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    Giddion Hyriuka
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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 18, 2009 @ 02:32am
    Not too bad, not too bad at all, cant wait to see what happens later on.


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