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Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 08:29pm


	ZOMG! =D You gotz your internet back! ^o^ Hugs Take your time on posting the art. School's more important. Is trying to change her attitude about school >o< ... So I sat here and read the whole chapter. And guess what? ... Yuki loves it. =D <3 It's easy to understand, it's fluffy stuff, and written very well. You know what made me chuckle? When Gaara spat on his hand. >o< Oh dude. That's so gross, I would never shake someone's hand like that. Imagining it makes me feel sick. >>; This story was just adorable! n.n With the little Hiniku, and little Gaara. You describe the things pretty well. <3 Critque?...Usually, I don't like to give critque, since I don't like it myself (But still, if you feel that you need to critque me, then do so. >o< I like help. I just...don't like being critqued. I like honesty.). But. I have noticed an error: People everyone were having conversations with other, and at the village gates it was no different. ^ Well...You typed "people everyone". I think that's it...Maybe you meant to type "each other", but I'm not sure. Otherwise, I didn't notice anything else. But it's a great story, and I'm glad that I got to read it. >w< Hee. heart Can't wait to read the others. o-o Well, I can. I'm just excited about reading more. ... o_o Watches Gaara and Iia >=D Oh yeah!

Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 11:37pm


	hugs heart w heart I love my internet! Thanks. @.@ YAY! <333333x637458423 I'm so glad you liked it! I tried my best, and I'm glad it's easy to understand; I hate confusing stories. O.O WTF...I should shoot myself for such a horrendous typo. Thanks, I'll go fix it right awaaay! Sorry your eyes had to go through the pain of that sentence! D: And it's right at the beginning too. x.X Glad you liked the little ending parts. xD

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 12:38am


	x3 We all love it. I think. o.o Welcome. x> Yuki hates them too. That's why sometimes, she has to skip to the main point to understand. xD Didn't have to do that for this story. :3 But yush. Yuki wikes it. heart And it's good that you put wots of effort into it. :> o_o...It's ok. Because I know that lots of people make typos. xB And you saw my writing. x3 Hah. Oh yah. -w- Yuki did. <3

Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:14am


	Yah. xD I always try! ^_~ Typos are ebil. T.T Hee. <3

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:18am


	It's hard to not try when writing a story, unless you make it VERY simple and not fruitful. xD "Fruitful". A weird word to use. x.x They are. D:< <3

Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:25am


	I don't even know what you mean by "fruitful" xD I hate them...mostly because it's my fault they're there. XwX

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:49am


	I guess it's my way, if it's not a real word, to say that it's descriptive, vivid, etc. xD xwx That sucks. D:< I usually find them late.

Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 03:38am


	Yes those sand ninja are nuts XD! Nice begining to the story...thanks for the cretique on mine too! Expect chapter 2 at some point!

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 11:40am


	Tai: Thanks! I'm looking forward to your 2nd chapter! Yuki: Ah. xD I like that word. Me too. >w<

Commented on: Sun Jan 22, 2006 @ 01:00am

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