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Poems
Bittersweet Memories
The moments I share,
The seconds i breathe,
The power to remember.
Memories.
These memories make me relive what happened. Beautiful memories, strong memories, weak memories.
Some can make me laugh, some make me cry.
Some I want to keep. Others i want to forget.

The moments I live,
The second my heart beats,
The power to remember.
Memories.
The memories that can bring me joy one day but can bring pain the next.
The feelings of these momentd are the memories's heart beat, the sounds their song.

They are bitter for they are from the past.
They are sweet because we can remember.






User Comments: [3]
Wolf Goddess_Luna
Community Member





Sat Nov 14, 2009 @ 02:33am


I like this one. Its really good. I love the way you give the poems life.


Silencematters
Community Member





Mon Nov 16, 2009 @ 08:33pm


*blink blink* eek WOW........................


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:38pm


Another beautiful piece! The first four lines sort of held an ABCB rhyming pattern. Did you do that on purpose? It was brilliant.
The same pattern popped up in line eight through eleven. It wasn't as accurate or as pretty as the first rhyme, but it was still nice.
...Do I even have to tell you that you ended this well anymore? xP
Keep writing!


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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