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Ash The Tiger
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Alexanders story
(heres another story im working on it's a bunch of chapters this one is based on a chaartcer named Alexander who will soon be the strongest being ever this is his childhood)


My father has always been somewhat of a crued man. He had a round face, long red hair like myself, and red eyes that seemed like lava. They haunted the dreams of anyone who stared into them. He was cruel and never right. He made my childhood hell, literally.

I lived in a house which was made of gems, fire dragon gems to be exact. How do you make that? Simple of course, kill a fire dragon, rip out its hard firery bones and break them into pieces. Harsh yet fun

We lived in hell, yes pure fiery hell. Where all you hear is souls of the one living screaminng in mercy, their skin and spirit melting in the blood fountain. Poisonous blood. All you smell is smoke, all you taste is bitter infected air. Everything around is red or black, and worst of all all you feel is pain. Pain of being unloved, hated, but as a kid I didnt really care. I was only nine million years old, Which was nine in human years, to me nothing mattered. Hell was my home

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Smack went my fathers hand as it hit my mothers face. My mother had redish purplish hair with bright light pink eyes. Her hair was down curled to her shoulders. She yelped a little, my father with anger in his voice and face. "You little tramp! you cheat on me and then have the nerve to say sory?!" he bellowed. My mother fell back on her butt and slid her hand to the now red mark on her cheek.
"i wouldn't have cheated if you were a better man, and didnt spend your time hurting me and being such a b***h!"she sobbed as tears rolled down her cheek.

I stood my place, fear in my body, my eyes teared up. My fathers hands began to glow red and they grew on fire. My mother glanced at me, she knew what was going to happen, while i didnt. "Alexander sweetie look away! Don't ever be like your father! Look away now!" was all she said for he final words.

I hesitatded but looked away before a big splurt sound was heard. My body tremelbed as I slowly turned my head to peek behind. My mother lay on the ground flames around her body, a big pile of blood suroounding her.

Tears flodded my eyes as my father turned to face me. Something hard hit my face, it felt like being trampled by an elephant, I flew back and crashed intot he ground with the back of me head. Right before everything went black my fater stoof over me and grumbled, "Women are worthless, you got your patheticness from your mother."

(hope u likey razz )





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Redirect Myself with You
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comment Commented on: Mon Nov 30, 2009 @ 12:07am
That was short but I loved the rich imagery!


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