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April

Entry one:
Layering: 10/10
Color balance: 9.7/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 10/10
How it Relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 8/10
Overall score: 57.7
Comments: I saw this, and i was like "wow, i love it" everything looks great, and i expected nothing but from you. I have some issues with all the scars you used. I would have maybe used an all over scar like the henna or scarification tattoo to replace all of these scars. Also, i wish there was a lot more white. There's a little bit in the shoulders, head and feet, but i don't see any in the torso. Other then that, I think it's great.

Entry two:
Layering: 9/10
Color balance: 7/10
Flow: 9/10
Theme: 10/10
how it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
Overall score: 55/60
Comments: This is another i like. It's very well made, but it's not without it's flaw's. The color balance isn't the best. You have too much orange in the torso, too much green in the feet and not enough of that blue-ish purple color everywhere else. If the feet and torso had better breakups of color, I'd be fine with it. I really like your head layering of the green and the headpiece though, very creative.

Entry three:
Layering: 8/10
Color Balance: 7/10
Flow: 8/10
Theme: 9/10
How it relates: 9/10
Diversity of items: 9.7/10
Overall score: 49.7/60
Comments: Uh... Okay, like before, i like this as well, but closer inspection, i see things i don't like, and here's my main problem; the feet. I don't know why anyone does the thing where they put heels on, then socks or something. I've never liked on any tektek at all; I just don't get it. On top of that, your layering is odd. I didn't know what on earth that black mound was on her arms (it's hair, now that i realize it) and there is color distribution problems, like there is too much yellow in the feet and not enough on the head. Not enough purple as well.

Entry Four:
Layering: 9.8/10
Color balance: 10/10
Flow: 9.8/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
Overall score: 59.6/60
Comments: I love this too. The colors are all appealing, and it's just gorgeously layered. The thing i have a problem with is the feet, and it's only because they look a little misshapen. i think if you took off the minty rose flats, it would have been fine. But that's about it. I love how you utilized the two different types of blue, and i guess this is the one you were working on when it crashed. If not, i don't know.

Entry Five:
Layering: 8/10
Color balance: 9.8/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 9/10
How it relates: 9/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
Overall score: 55.8/60
Comments: Wow, I've never seen those eyes look so good! xD I have to try it sometime... but moving along, i only have a few nitpicky problems. There isn't enough green in the skirt, and the layering is a little boring. I think the colors are amazing on this. Like, it's a big huge shot of rainbow in my face (haha) All in all, it was a really great avatar

How well the line looks: 10/10
How well it relates: 7.5/10
How well it looks from a technicality scale: 9/10
Score: 26.5/30
Comments: Personally, this line looks a little uncohesive. The first three look like they belong together, a set perhaps. But the third and fourth look different, and because of one main component; The black. It's only in two outfits, and I think it should have actually been skipped. Maybe a different color would have worked. But all in all, this looks great. You've got great layering (third and fourth) Simple layering (second and fifth) and something in between (the first) Great job.
Overall score: 304.3/330

Kakanji

Entry one:
Layering: 8/10
Color balance: 8/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
Overall score: 56/60
Comments: This is a good interpretation of the song. I can actually see the singer in this garment. But there are distribution problems with this. Why on earth is there only brown in the head? I don't like it when that happens, and i wish it was distributed. Layering's a little simple too.

Entry two:
Layering: 10/10
Color balance: 8/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 9/10
Overall score: 57/60
Comments: I also think this is a good interpretation of the song. I heard something about her cheeks flushing or something, and the blush was awesome. Moving right along, Color issues with the pinks. You have a completely different pink in the feet then the rest. As well as purples too. The greens are lovely though. You also used a set (two goghs) and I had a sad face when i saw that.

Entry three:
Layering: 10/10
Color balance: 8/10
Flow: 7/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
Overall score: 55/60
Comments: I admit, this is an AWESOME character avatar, but you could have made him match a little better. and FLOW better too, because the cut off in the waist is awful. It's like he cut legs off a random guy and put them on him... With the browns and grays of the top, and then the blues of the bottom, it just... blah.

Entry four:
Layering: 10/10
Color balance: 9.8/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 10/10
overall score: 59.8/60
Comments: God, i love this. The second i laid eyes on this, i was instantly in love. It fits the song, It layers right, it's all really perfect (can you tell I'm having a fangasm? xD) THe only thing that kept this from being perfect was the bit of white. It's in the torso, and it's the sugarplum top with the lace blouse... It's so much. Besides that, it's absolutely perfect.

Entry Five:
Layering: 10/10
Color balance: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Theme: 10/10
How it relates: 10/10
Diversity of items: 9/10
Overall score: 58/60
Comments: My youtube stopped, so i couldn't listen to the song D: I just gave you a ten... But moving along with that, the layering, I love, especially the neck area. The colors are off with the pants, and you used an egyptian set.

How well the line looks: 9/10
How well it relates: 5/10
How well it looks from a technicality scale: 10/10
Score: 24/30
Comments: These don't look cohesive. The pink one especially. You have the red, gold and green, the black blue and brown, the pink red and white, the brown pink and green and the dark blue brown and gray. These are all different colors, and i wish you tied some of them together. It does look very well done though.
Overall score: 309.8/330