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First thing: Right in the first paragraph, I'm wondering, why does he go by the alias 'Krow'? What significance does it hold? And, also, I'm left to wonder why you brooke so much detail in the upper city when you are descending to a lower level.

I chose Krow because it is A. It is my way sticing it to the english language because c is an anoying letter when it comes to phonics. B. I chose Krow because it makes one think of the bird, how it has such a bad rep its meant to bring out a kind of subcontious evil essence. Plus I could have chosen raven but then I'd just be commenting on Poe's poem and not making my own character.

The reason I put so much detail is because I want to give the reader a sense of contrast. The two realms are opposites the Areocity a beautiful city were mankind is shakled by the IPK. The Undercity is a dark and dispairing place, its cold and very few live there. But those who do will be free, free in thier prison. Yay irony.

Good job,a dn good points