The Fairy Godmother had had ENOUGH.
It was bad enough that children didn't believe in her anymore, but noooooooooo, now modern humans had found something NEW to torment her with...SLANG.
And now that she finally had someone to believe in her?
The foolish child believed her to be a GAY MALE.
And what happens when a child believes her to be something?
She becomes it.
It was enough to make her want to tear her hair out.
Well, HIS hair out.
creativity: 25//25
style: 15//25
overall appeal: 20//5o
total: 60//100
Crit/sug:
xDiSTORTED DAYTiMEx
creativity: 3//25
style: 20//25
overall appeal: 30//5o
total: 55//1oo
Crit/sug: This is VERY boring... you should have done *something* with the head.
Vixplora
"Ladies," her father had said with strong conviction when she was a little girl, "are not bald." No wonder her mother's hair had been thinning so rapidly. Dealing with the man and his colleagues was maddening. Lady this, lady that... Lady, lady, lady!
As if those gentlemen knew anything about being a lady. So one early morning, Vix left. Better to risk the frustrations of the world than the ones at home. At least she ought to keep some hair.
Many annoyances, scraps, bruises and scars later, Vix had nothing to show for her determination. In fact, so irritating was the world, she had simply pulled out her hair faster!
And now, this crazy woman and her feisty pokemon wouldn't leave her alone!
And Chuck.
Cowardly Chuck, hiding behind her leg.
"Great one, Chuck."
creativity: 20//25
style: 19//25
overall appeal: 33//5o
total: 72//1oo
Crit/sug: This made me LOL! Very cute. ^.^
Hellfire Rogue
Oh no, what happened to THIS poor dear!?
Well she just graduated from PokeStudies with honor,
but her battle skills were below par. Not the type
to let her family (full of gym trainers and champions)
down, she decided to embark on a Solo Journey to
get in some good hours of practice. "This will be fun!"
Weeks Later
Scarred from a tangle with a whole thornbush full
of Wild Roselia and her favorite shirt stained with blood,
a pokemon trainer challenges! She gladly accepts the practice.
What a tough battle! After her opponent used
Flying Murderous Fish on her and got a less-than-tasty
morsel shoved halfway down her throat, her "trusty"
sidekick HunneeBunz got lazy and ran off for a while.
After spending hours trying to find her and pulling
out her own hair in frustration, she came back no her own.
I think this schoolgirl is ready to go on home!!!
creativity: 25//25
style: 23//25
overall appeal: 40//5o
total: 88//1oo
Crit/sug: Very good. I like it a lot. The colors are nice and the story is amusing. Good job, and good luck on the rest of the rounds.
Ratt Scabies
Ever since she had been given her first Pokemon, he had disobeyed her...or, obeyed her in a way that ended up being painful and/or humiliating.
"Chuuchilla, use ThunderShock!... NOT ON ME OWW OWW OWWWWWW."
It was enough to make her tear her hair out.
So she did.
Creativity: 1o//25
style: 15//25
overall appeal: 25//5o
Crit/sug: Meh, very run of the mill. The color scheme is not terribly extraordinary and neither is the story. I do like how you still gave her a LITTLE hair.
5o//1oo
