So I've been less busy and had more time to write.
Falling through water is harder
Than falling through sand;
Sinking so softly
I bet you don't notice
You're lying on top of your death
Until you find yourself taking a too-earthy breath
Surrender to win
Relax and give in
And you'll find they lose interest
And life lose its fire
But struggle and sink
And just on the brink
Of despair you will find me
To welcome you in.
I can't seem to write a second verse but already it sounds like a song I'd like to hear.
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I have nowhere else to post this- please comment kindly, this is just random freeform directly from my head.
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eleanne
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