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I plan on taking some of my rp samples and posting them. Please PM me or post a comment telling me if you like them or not. If not, why and how can I improve it. Thank you.
'Gods, help us all.'

                ---''Get down! Get down!' The rest of the words were drowned out by an explosion, engulfing thousands into flames. Thousands fled, but were cut down quickly. The small town was a big target. Buildings were already collasping, and the army was already eliminated. The whole world was under attack, and everyone was hoping on a miracle.Thats when Adam was called upon.
                ---Shots were being fired, and Adam manouvered quickly through the town's now obstical like appearence. He and his squad were to take out an alien stronghold from within with a secret weapon. From there, they were to seek the gods, hopefully slowing down the Alien's process. It was a small squad of ten, eight of them already deseased. The tags of the dead eight rested lifelessly on Adam's chest. "Their sacrifice's won't be in vain." That saying traveled with he and his best friend, Trey, as they snuck into the base. As soon as they entered, though, guns began a'blazen. The aliens were cut down quickly, but more replaced them.
                ---Suddenly, Adam flew to the ground holding his arm. A large wound stretching from his hand to his shoulder blade began to seep blood. Trey was quick to respond by helping him up against the wall, making sure the enemies fire couldn't hit him. Adam cursed, leaving a scent of urgency in the air. Trey quickly went back to the fight, making sure to stick close to Adam while defending his own hide. Adam closed his eyes, hoping it would be all over soon. But he was dead wrong.
                ---The room instantly became quiet. Quickly thanking the gods, Adam opened his eyes to check. There was a blanket of smoke in the room, presumably from the grenade launcher that was attached to their weapons. The smoke quickly cleared, and that was enough to make a man speechless. Hundreds of aliens bodies littered the floor. It seemed all of them were dead. All except one. Adam stared, eyes wider than his mouth, at the scene. There stood an alien on the far side of the room, side facing him, holding a lifeless body. Trey. He couldn't believe his eyes. He was so beaten up, blood covered his body, his arm now having a hole out of the side of it. Adam howled with anger, tears falling from his eyes like rain, and picked up his gun. In a mere few seconds, the alien was torn to shreds by the bullets, dropping Trey. Adam scurried to help him, tripping every few seconds. He finally reached the body and dropped down to the shallow breathing body, eyes full of fear. Not only fear but also hate and anger. The gods did this, watching their war like a little movie. He tore a piece of his shirt off, holding it against Trey's wound. Quickly, he tied the cloth to him and threw him over his shoulders. With his free hand, he dropped the secret weapon.
                ---Slowly, Adam emerged from the building, Trey on his shoulder and a switch in his hand. There was a small click, and the stronghold burst into flames. He put Trey on the ground and pulled out his radio. "Ready for air support. And bring medics quickly." He kneeled next to Trey. "Don't worry. Help is on the way. Just hang in there," In a matter of minutes, a few helicopters flew in, a couple of Black Ops and a lone medical one. A medical one took Trey, and it was as gone as quickly as it came. When they were just a speck on the horizon, another explosion erupted in the stronghold, flames shooting like arrows. Lucky for Adam, he didn't sustain any serious injuries, only rendering unconsious and screwing with his memory. The reinforcements weren't as lucky.'


                ----Adam awoke in a cold sweat, scared shitless from his nightmare. Haunting nightmares. He sat up quickly, arm reaching for his gun. He was lucky to be alive. He couldn't say the same to anyone else. If he knew where anyone else is. If anyone else is alive. He walked out of his make-shift house and took a breath. He was going to have to do anything to survive. He had to know if anyone else was alive. He needed to restart the human race. He had to find a spouse, and maybe with her, other couples helping to increase the little population and rebel against the aliens.






I took my post from an rp I'm in and edited it a little, adding some more to it, before I stuck it in here. Please give me some suggestions on how to make it better, or if its fine just tell me that. If I get a lot of good comments I'll continue to post some of my rp posts.
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