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...xD You're RPing with my bro? <3 Neat!
>w< Pffft...Sasuke's shorts...Heeh.
Anyway, on with teh reviewing!
It's a beautiful chapter. o.o It's actually one of my favorites, besides the one when she first meets Gaara. You did very well with description, and I liked how you made Itachi's face in the cracked frame hard to see. xO You go girl. <3
And the proluge is also touching. o.o What you say is true; family is someone who cares. <3 *Hugs Iia* =w= Hee.