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We Live, We Love, We Forgive, and COMPLAIN ABOUT STUFF! :D I put together some poetry, write what's on my mind, whatever :P


ElbLeaf
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Inspired ~Poem #1~
This is a poem that I wrote for a contest, but I would like some feedback before it gets judged. It was inspired by a picture, and I really like writing from a visual. Hope you like it.




Sitting in Darkness

Sitting in the darkness
Where I'm at rest
Nothing can save me there
No one among the blessed

Tears fall from my eyes
No one to wipe them away
They dry and stick to my face
Leaving a mark to stay

My hair swept in front of my face
A breeze brushed by me
I look up to find out
What I would be amazed to see

A man kneeled down
Bending to see me
He wiped the tears from my face
But he could not agree

For when he told me,
"You are not alone".
It made me smile
Which surely had shown

He reached for my hand
That took me by surprise
His warmness surrounded me
That made me arise

That's the time his hug
Made me feel love
Sitting in that darkness
Is something I should not be afraid of.





 
 
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