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" Fallen tears for a broken promise"

He walks through the night looking for her having nothing on his mind but his love for her. She pushed him away as he tried to help, she turned from and every one who cared thinking that she was alone. His eyes started to water as he feels the same pain he has for the past few days. He sees the fallen rose on the headstone and lays under it on the fresh grave again tonight. He tries to picture her happy and how happy she made him. He wish she didn't do this that she had came to him pulling the blood stained shirt closer to his chest he starts to cry as the rain began to fall he whispers softly "please forgive me, my love". a new tear is wiped away by the rain. he covers to her blood stained stirt with his body and unable to keep his promise he whispers "I'm sorry" he reachs up for the rose ,that he had put there five nights ago ,when he started to lose control and she was put on this place,and holds it close to his heart with her shirt. he takes the blood stained blade and slides it across his wrist just as she had done ending his life just as he said to the night "I'll be with you soon" another tear is wiped away by the rain, he lives no more.






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GAlA NOTICE ADMlN
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 03:04am
That was very touching and showed just how much he loved her. It almost made me tear just reading it.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 03:14am
i...... cannot speak. words cannot express the choking love in my throat.....



DarkRee
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shans
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 10:22pm
i loved it. the bond they shared...and how he'd died for her.


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