Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

The Warrior within
its just a story I made with me and some friends in it.
Kuroi and Suki were riding along the Plains of Bloody Hell. "hey Kuroi, why do they call this area the Plains of Bloodly Hell?" Suki asked. "I dont know excatly but tales say that along time ago there was a battle between the south and the north of Moontan for who woulod be the king and queen of the land. There was a huge battle between them. It lasted for years non-stop, night and day until one day there was only two people were left. they battle with the bit of energy they had left. One soilder killed the other by slicing his head off. That day was 102 dregress and the last soilder died from the heat. All that was left was a feild covered with bodies and blood. that field was this field. They say that every night on a full moon you can here the last two soilders battle to there very deaths." Kuroi said. Suki could fell the color drain from her body as she was listening to Kuroi explain the story of the feild wishing she never asked. the sun was setting over the horizon. "suki mybe we should camp here tonight its getting late and we havent eaten since 5am this morning and Im hungrey" kuroi said. "NO WERE MOVING ON" screamed Suki with fear easily seen in her eyes. "whats a matter?" asked Kuroi. "n-n-n-nothing" Suki said shaking. "something is a matter now tell me, was it the tale I told u?" asked Kuroi. "um.......well........ya it was I hate gousts storys but i have u here it would have been worse if you never found me." Suki said as the color returned to her face and leting a smile form on her lips. So the two friends sat down and tied the horses to a stak in the ground so they wouldn't run away and started a fire to eat. They ate the fish and talked the whole night until the moon was high into the night sky. As the flamesd from the fire was going out Kuroi went into his sleeping bag and Suki snuggled into hers. "kuroi can u put the fire out im too tired." Suki said yawning. "Kuroi..........Kuroi......" Suki asked woundering why he never responded. She got out out of her sleeping bag and looked t kuroi. " Great he's sleeping, guys, there so annoying" Suki thought to herself listening to him snore. So she put the fire out and went back into the sleepingbag and fell asleep under the light of the moon knowing that moontan was looking over her, protecting her as she slept.






User Comments: [3] [add]
[ Burnt Out Toaster ]
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 10:25pm
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!! heart


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 01:48am
WOW! Thats great!...but u should have done like mean while blah blah blah, you know telling people that your telling about suki and kuroi, BUT ITS GREAT!! mrgreen



Queen of Black Hearts
Community Member
Munchkinette
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 02:59am
Hey shannon! Where am I in your siggy?


User Comments: [3] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum