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Yay! Suicidal Angstyness! Can't get better than that ^.^ Yeah this is a really really REALLY angsty peice. confused It's one of my favorites though, and kind of gets repetative but it's almost more of lyrics than a normal poem. So yeah, sorry if the repetitiveness annoys you. Just skip over the repeating parts? (Though all the repeating parts have slight variations so I don't suggest it.) Background for the peice: I wrote this after my sister and I had a huge fight. So, once again she was the inspiration for me in this poem (she ussually is) but it's not all about her. The poem is about everything in general in my life at the time. Keep in mind, I was in a very very deep and stupid depression, and for those who will worry or something, I am *NOT* like this anymore *AT ALL, mmmkay? I'm all better now. 3nodding* But thanks for your concern. All This Noise What am I doing? Why do you ask? Why does it matter? You don't give a ****** Leave me alone The silence is comforting The screams I can hear Are all in my head Sometimes I want it to go away All this pain All this noise Throw myself down a flight of stairs Break a leg All this noise The pressure is great The silence is small The light it was blinding The red didn't fade I tried not to weep But the tears found me burning The rain was of acid Your hatred of silk Sometimes I want it to go away All this pain All this noise Walk myself into the middle of a street Hit a car windshield All this noise Where are you going? Why do you ask? Why does it matter? You don't give a **** Let me alone The darkness is soothing The sobs I can feel Are soft in the dark Sometimes I want it to go away All this pain All this noise Take out a knife with a severed blade Cut a vein All this noise The wounds are slow healing The scratches are burning The bruises are black The red never fades The walls are still screaming My mind is still binding The acid's now puddles Your hatred still silk Sometimes I want it to go away All this pain All this Noise Down a whole bottle of anti-depressants Fall asleep All this noise What am I saying? Why do you ask? Why does it matter? I don't give a **** Don't leave me alone My thoughts are frightening The silence I make Is from contemplation of death PS:: Remember peeps, there's more than just this one. So, go ahead and read and reivew those while you're at it, mmmkay? wink heart**

Posted by: Rass Fri Jan 21, 2005 @ 11:44pm

[b:723929a83e]A First On TV

This is the twentieth century,
you are there, preparing to skin
a human being alive. Your part
will be to remain calm.[/color:723929a83e][/b:723929a83e]

-David Ignatow[/color:723929a83e][/align:723929a83e]

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lm Stoned
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Commented on: Sat Jan 22, 2005 @ 09:04am


	theres a meaning isnt there? gonk

Commented on: Tue Jan 25, 2005 @ 02:31am


	Rass writes poetry to express her feelings? Rass wants to down a whole bottle of anti-depressants?! And cut herself?! No, Rass! Don't do it! Please, it's not worth it! D':

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Commented on: Wed Jan 26, 2005 @ 02:54am


	i love your poems heart i think you should write more!! you could go somewhere with your talent!

Commented on: Sat Feb 05, 2005 @ 08:58pm


	It's really good! heart It looks like lyrics, though.....

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Commented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 03:15am


	that is an awsome poem .you should enter it in a poetry contest were u live. blaugh

Commented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 03:48am


	its a very sad poem..but has a tragic beauty.i love it^^

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Commented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 05:10am


	Wow.... eek You're one of the best Dark Poets I've seen yet! ^^ That was some great poetry, very depressing, write more! o_O As long as you're not that uberly depressed. sweatdrop

Commented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 10:42pm


	Very good dark poetry. I like it. Looking forward to the next one you write. wink

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Commented on: Mon Feb 07, 2005 @ 09:21am


	More diffrent than I have ever seen very odd,....BUT I LOVE IT!

Commented on: Tue Feb 08, 2005 @ 01:13pm


	It was very beautiful and depressing at the same time...I love it! blaugh

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Commented on: Sat Feb 26, 2005 @ 01:43pm


	wow, longer than most i've read, and much like a song. but very well written. especially with the whole "Let me alone" part. some people might look at that and be like "that's illiterate and can't be said like that" well news flash, their retards. that is extremely well written, and no where near illiterate. anyways, if anyone says your illiterate or can't write poems well, please direct me to them as i would gladly break their fingers so they can't type stupidity anymore. anyways, i think i should really use more grammar when i talk about others being illiterate sweatdrop but having grammar and using it are two different things. i use enough grammar to be declared literate, but if i used my grammar to the fullest, i would probably be declared too literate sweatdrop well, i'm going to read some of your other poems.

Commented on: Thu Mar 31, 2005 @ 06:19am


	All of these are beautiful, but his one... hits home........ i'm working on getting out of my hole, and I'm glad to see you made it! heart Thanks for the beautiful words.

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Commented on: Tue Apr 05, 2005 @ 03:36pm


	I can't believe someone reported this poem as a "suicide encouragement" when it sounds more like a cry for help. Well done, though. ^^

Commented on: Wed Apr 27, 2005 @ 12:01pm


	Suicide encouragement my arse. This is simply good poetry. I'm not a fan of repetition so this wasn't one of my favorites. But it really goes emo in this poem. I still liked it alot though whee heart -Kiro-

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Commented on: Sun May 22, 2005 @ 04:49am


	Depressing, but honest, sometimes how someone can feel when they're really depressed.

Commented on: Sun May 22, 2005 @ 04:51am


	Depressing, but honest, sometimes how someone can feel when they're really depressed.

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Commented on: Sat Jul 16, 2005 @ 02:02pm


	This one was interesting, although I must say that I kind of liked your other ones better. True, it does sound more of a song than a poem, but as a song, it probably would have been an interesting one to listen to. A lot of this one had to do with repetitive parts with changes, and sometimes, that's good for songs. The way you have it not repeating too much is good though, it probably has just enough repeating in it to make it good. Another interesting part was when you changed "you" to "I". Mm.. I think that when you said "hit a car windshield" it might have sounded better if the line was somehow shortened; other than that I don't think any other parts should be changed ^ ^

Commented on: Sun Jul 17, 2005 @ 11:46am


	"Someone is going through a deoressing stage and people are trying to help that person but him/her keeps pushing them away. That person wishes to die and sooth the emtion pain. Lose it forever in the endless sleep. But then at the end, that person now wishes for help. ^^ Very touching."

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Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 01:33am


	I'm in love.

Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 03:37pm


	I dont like angsty poetry but i can appreciate when a poem is good. You expressions you use really get the pain across.I feel bad myself,reading it.Im now addicted to your poetry.

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