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hey this is chapter one of a Hiei story im doing ^_^ have fun ^_^(oh its in th 2ned person for now but it will be in 1st person in the next chapter.... Ih think.. ok so it wil never be in teh 1st person... so when i say your or you.... i actualy mean her/she) OK here's her profile ^_^
Name: Tally (Tal)
Age: 18 (Hiei’s 19)
Height: 5’2 (Hiei’s like 5’3-5’4…. That’s short for a boy ok!! Just because they say he’s short doesn’t mean he’s like 4’2!!)
Eyes: Changing between Grey and Blue and Green your rays stay Grey most of the time but some times they get , in this order, Brown/green, Light Blue, grey, blue, black rings(in that order from pupil out to the edges of the iris…my eyes do this its so cool looking ^_^)
Body: Although it’s not perfect you have no bulges or anything like that so your not fat just your not toned either. You have hardly any muscle mass so your weight is mostly fat witch is just 110 and that a healthy weight for and girl. Your breast’ are a c cup and your but is normal size but you have birthing hips ^_^!!
Face/Skin: Ok your face is very pretty in the little girl type way. Your face looks many times younger then you are and you have slight dimples on your cheeks when you smile. Your skin tone is slightly pale with a natural blush on your cheeks.
Hair: Short red hair with darker red under lights (natural… it your baby hair basically) your bangs hug your face adding to the little girl look. (Ok you’re a cute little girl. Your face isn’t chubby at all…. Just incase you where wondering)
Race: human and a little bit of physic.

OK the story takes place in the human world only going to the spirit world every now and then but there is a lot of Koenma and Boton and Every one even Toy and the other gang ^_^. Yes this is a Hiei Story and I’ will do my best to keep every IC unless it calls for some OOC meaning when they aren’t acting like them selves. The story starts out in the woods of Demon world. I know it says it will take place in Human world but it starts in Demon world ok ^_^. SS~
A girl with short red hair is running through the woods, her little feet throbbing from under her begging her to stop. She presses on turning her head to see swords coming through the foliage behind her. Letting out a gasp she pushes her self farther. A few feet ahead she trips on a root lying in her path landing face first in the dirt. She lays there for a few seconds until she hears a voice barking orders to the many snarling beast that followed him all with the same purpose: to find her and take what they can.
“This way men!! We will flog (beat severely) this girl and strip her clean of her positions!! COME NOW YOU DOGS!! He who finds her first can do with her what he wishes!!” Says the leader, a big beefy man with hardly any neck and yellow eyes that seem to glimmer with malice, as he comes into an open spot in the path, he looking around spotting a piece of white cloth from the girl’s dress that had snagged a tree limb, almost completely drenched in blood suggesting that the limb had also cut her leg. Grinning evilly he sniffs the cloth the shudders in pleaser at the stench of fresh blood.
“This way gents!! Our treasure lies only a few passes ahead…” He says while walking through the foliage towards where the girl lay in terror. She scrambles and gets back up on to her feet and starts to run again. Not long after she trips again unable to get back up. Grasping at eh moss beneath her hands she pulls herself into the dense foliage to her right just as the man and about twenty other ghoulish creatures come out and into view. It took all her will power not to scream at the sight.
The man was not a man at all. For what she had mistaken for a beard was indeed a swearing mass of snakes each coiling and hissing to their master at every noise made. His skin was pale and lifeless and seemed to be falling off his body. His teeth were pointed and sharp as where his nails. The others where no better, each one a, different ugly color with sharp teeth and claws, some with tails while others had torn bat-like wings and scales covered all their body’s. They each watched their master until he gave them the signal to search. They all snicker and start walking around. Then that’s when she noticed that one of them wasn’t ghoulish, but rather very handsome.
His gravity defying hair was enough to distract her from the others. His Red eyes scan the area landing directly on her making her gasp slightly. She had never seen such beautiful eyes. His face was enough to turn any girl to jelly but his eyes are what stole her. HE looked at her for a few more seconds, just standing there, and then started moving towards her. She panicked remembering what the situation was here. She scooted back into eth shadows even though she knew that with a white gown on she would be easy to spot. He kneeled down in front of her hiding spot, His black coat spreading out around him, and moved the foliage from his line of vision. She started to tremble under his gaze, waiting for him to announce his finding to the others. She shut her eyes not wanting to see what would happen next and was surprised to feel a hand reach out and touch her forehead as if checking for a temperature.
Opening her eyes a little she sees him leaning in and examining her as if for injuries. HE finishes his search and reaches out to for her. She backs up only to hit a tree behind her and he grabs her arms hoisting her out of her spot bridle style. She starts to struggle but soon stops when he growls at her. She whimpers slightly from the ferocity of his growl and closes her eyes again trying to block out the visions of what they might do to you.
“Hiei good show my lad! Gents we have found our little run away!! Now lad just hand her over and you may have your fun once we have taken what we need.” Said the boss.
“Hey Hiei, if you don’t want her, can I have her?” said one demon.
“No let me have her… haven’t had a decent rut in a long time!” said another
You whimper slightly and bite your lip. He wouldn’t really give you to them would he?
“Hn…” is all you heard before feeling the man holding you shift you around slightly before apparently turning and walking away. Opening your eyes you look up at the man carrying you questioningly. He just looks forward and continues the way they had come from.
“Hiei I told you to wait!!” Said the boss, anger evident in his voice.
“Hn, I don’t take orders form anyone… especially pigs like you…” Eh said in a monotone voice. The other demons growl and one launches at the man only to end up in two peaces on the ground. The girl blinks a few times before realizing what happened. Was this man going to kill her just like that other creature? Suddenly the scenery around her became blurry as if she where in fast motion. Looking up she sees that the man was still plain to see but every thing else was blurred around him. She looks ahead of them only to see another big blur. The motion was kind of making her sick so she turned her head into his chest to block out the blurring scenery. Suddenly she feels her self stop and she looks out to where they had stopped. It looked like a normal cliff only it had doors in the side made out of cloth. The man walked into one of the cloth doors leading into a cave like place. (No this is not where Hiei was raised this is something different but it’s the same basic thing, rooms in the rock walls)
He walks over and puts her down on a fur covered cot. HE then walks away into another room leaving her to look around. The walls where the same color as the rock witch was surprisingly a nice red color. The ground was littered with furs for carpeting and it had three cots and a few cloth doors leading into other rooms. She finds her self petting the furs she sat on as the man comes back through the door with a box in his hands. She watches him timidly as eh walks back over to the cot and kneels in front of her. She watches as he opens the box revealing a first aid kit. He suddenly grabs her foot making panic for a few seconds until her started cleaning the wounds on her legs. She calms down and starts to study his features more.
She just noticed that he has removed his coat revealing a well chiseled body that wasn’t over muscular but instead it was very lean. His face seemed so blank, but in his eyes it was like a battle was taking place. She found her self starting into his eyes as eh started to wrap her legs. HE looks up and locks gazes with her for a second before saying ‘hn’ and pulling her upper half closer so that her feet where touching eth ground in front of him. She again tenses up but soon relaxes as eh begins to wash the dirt off her face and arms. When he’s done he looks her over and sees the blood staining the front of her night gown. Grabbing her arms lightly he pulls her up and starts trying to remove her night gown.
She starts to struggle against him smacking his hands away from the bottom of her clothing and with every smack he seems to get more frustrated.
“Grrrr, onna do you want o bleed to death?” HE said in harsh tone. She winces and shake’s her head no.
“Then let me see your wounds…”He said glaring at her. She nods and takes off her night gown leaving her in her panties and bra. She looks at what’s left of her night gown and inwardly curses. There’s nothing left of her gown but a few rags held together by thin little strings.
He grunts and starts to inspect her wounds that consist of a gash on her choler done and on her side form running into low hanging branches. He cleans them tenderly and the wraps them as best he can.
“Wait here…” HE said while grabbing the now empty box and walking back into the room that he first went into leaving her to just stand there trying to cover herself as much as possible. He comes back in with what looks like a shirt and tosses it to her.
“Here you can wear this, now follow me and don’t touch anything. I’m in enough trouble because of you I don’t need you breaking anything.” HE said walking back into the same room again. She follows, slightly peeved, into the room. She can see that this room rarely ever has anyone in it. It looks like it’s never been touched. There’s an array of different weapons on the wall along with a merrier. There’s one dresser with a few candles burning and then in the center of the room is a pile of furs that she assumes is the bed.
“You can sleep in here on the bed, and tomorrow you will be taken back to the human world…” He said. Looking her in the eye. She looks right back at him, fear evident in her eyes.
“… Why’d you save me?” she said slightly fidgeting with the over sized tee-shirt.
“Why where you out there alone?” He said his face and voice not changing.
“I… I don’t know… I woke up and I was in this clearing and then I found a camp and… you know the rest…” She said looking down.
“Hn, get to sleep onna… I’ll keep Ryun out of here for tonight…” He said walking past her. He was almost out the door when she turned and put a hand on his shoulder.
“Wait! What’s your name?” she said. He just stairs at her hand for a few seconds before saying ‘hn’ and walking away. She sighs and goes to walk over toe h bed when his voice stopped her.
“Hiei…”
“Hm… Tal”
She nodes and climbs onto the bed grabbing one of the bigger furs and covers her self up curling into a ball and falling to sleep. Hiei watches her fall a sleep and finds him self smirking slightly. He mentally smacks him self mentally before walking out to eh main room to wait for his ‘boss’ to get home. He would keep her safe until he got her home, and this would be a good excuse to get into human world as well.

well whated you think? Hiei might have been out of charector but hes using her right now to get into Human world and get eh Shadow Sword so yeah... PLease coment but no flames please xd biggrin