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Song in progress 6 _6 (Tune) DaDa De Doooo Da De Doooo Re Re Meeee So Do ReRe fa 1st Verse I can't wait to be free of all sadness, hate and despair Praying and waiting for the one That can vanqish all that we fear, all that we fear Gather as one, united we stand Stand for what's right...even if it means giving your life 2nd Verse How can you tell when you've won the battle? But all you see is death and despair But you're still shaken and scared Chors Like a child you trust in him, fully comepletly, with out fear He loves you with all of his heart All he wants is the same from us Why can't we love him the same? (2x)

Posted by: Piper_Hallow_120 Tue Nov 07, 2006 @ 11:12pm

Peace be to thee that finds peace in one's self

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Commented on: Wed Nov 08, 2006 @ 03:33am


	good job sometimes if you can make some of the lines you ay ryme a little more and put in a good beat and mix the lines throughout the song and itll probly kickass

Commented on: Wed Nov 08, 2006 @ 05:47am


	Thanks Gun, that means alot coming from a fellow musican. I will keep your advice in mind and hopefully put it into effect for my next attempt. Many thanks wink

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