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Dying to Love You. (Poem)
Dying to Love You



Here’s a little story,
Of no matter what you do.
There’s always going to be someone
Who's dying to love you.

An innocent little school girl
Just as nice as she can be.
She’s pretty low in confidence,
So she think she ugly.

Her tears would come out black.
That seem like the worse.
She’d always smell like something bad.
It’s as she were cursed.

And as the years went by,
With her, no one would play.
Until a boy who noticed her
Had came to her that day.

He said “You look nice today.”
She didn’t say a word.
For it had shocked her to hear that.
It’s the first time she had heard.

“Thank you. You look nice, too...”
She said as her blood rushed.
He asked “Can I sit next to you?”
And then, that’s when she blushed.

“Why would you sit next to me?
I’m ugly and I smell....”
The boy said “That may be true, to you,
But I like you just as well."

Later on, that day,
After school let out.
The boy had knocked on the girl’s door.
He surely had no doubt.

When she answered, he hugged her.
She didn’t know what to do.
She’s asked him “What are you doing here?”
He said “I came to spend time, with you.”

She let him into the house.
“You may have a seat.
Or if you feel really hungry
I could get you something to eat?

“I just want to see your face,
To be with you, today.”
Inside it give her so much joy.
That’s something no one would say.

And when he grabbed her hand,
She’d always try to pursue.
He sat her down, in a chair
And then, took off her shoe.

“NO PLEASE, DON’T!!! MY FEET STINK!
Why don’t you listen to me?!
I told you before, that I stink,
And my face is...ugly...”

He said “I don’t really care.
Because that is what you think.
You keep saying such horrible things,
Like “I’m ugly” and “I stink.”

“I think that you're pretty.
I don’t mind your smell.
And if you think I’m dumb for this,
I guess I’m stupid, as well."

And then, he kissed her feet.
It shocked her, very so.
For no one’s went this far for her.
It was a first, you know?

“I want to kiss you, again,
But in a different place.”
He said as he stood up to her
“I want to kiss your face.”

"Please...don’t my kiss my face.
My skin is kinda rough.
No matter how or what I do,
it always will stay tough.”

“So, please, don’t try to kiss me.
My skin may cut your lips."
He said “I will not mind what you say”
And then, he grabbed her hips.

He brung her close and kissed her.
During kiss, she shed a tear.
And just as I said, they come out black.
They never come out clear.

“My tears, they come out black.
I told you I wasn’t cute.
Yet, you are still around me...
To you, I will not suit.”

“So what if you have black tears.
What you say is folly.
No matter how you really look,
I’ll still always be jolly."

“You seem to fail to realize,
That no matter what you do
Or how it is you really look,
I’ll always love you for you.”

“You’re not ugly, you’re different.
You’re beautiful, you see?
And if in no one else’s eyes,
You’re beautiful, to me.”

The girl was very happy.
To hear this was a first.
She’d learned that she was beautiful.
This surely was no curse.

So, every time in class,
He would sit next to her.
And every time he’d compliment,
She surely would concur.

And as the years went by,
The couple had no strife.
The charming boy, the beautiful girl
Became husband and wife.

So, if you really love someone,
Let this be a lesson.
Looks and stuff don’t really matter,
if you payed attention to this session.

There’s someone out there for someone,
No matter what you do.
“There’s always going to be someone
Who’s dying to love you”.

Japan Underground ™
Paul Peterson ©2006






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professionalbullshitter
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 06, 2007 @ 08:13am
WOOT!! I LIKE IT!! SO SWEET! heart heart WOOT!! 4laugh whee 3nodding xd


commentCommented on: Tue Oct 23, 2007 @ 05:47am
I LIKE SOMEONE...BUT HE THINKS HE'S UGLY...He send me his pic and i look at it...
i think hes cute...but I got offline..because my sister is using the computer...

I think paul...you know who it is! *wink* wink

SO SWEET... biggrin

xoxo,
crizzy



iPATD
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sUgarpLum_fAiry_24
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 20, 2007 @ 05:00am
awWw ...
thAts sOoO sweet of him^^
i lOve this oNe biggrin
^^


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 16, 2008 @ 07:59pm
eek that..<.<....>.>...was not bad AT ALL, i mean WOW u sure do hav a way with words man. once i started i couldnt stop 3nodding cool



daisukeH-true
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_LostIn_the-bloody_rain_
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 20, 2008 @ 08:00pm
adorable. heart


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 12, 2009 @ 10:04am
Is there a word more cuter than cute?
xD
Because that word has a total definition written right here.

I love it!

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Lady Kittens
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Chrona_13
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 16, 2009 @ 04:53pm
I love the poem. I also love the Yubel pic. Awesome! heart wink
Chrona


commentCommented on: Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 01:42pm
-eyes shimmer, smiling big- this is so wonderful ^ ^
It's amazing! I've never read anything like it, it's so sweet, and filled with love... it's just like you ^//^



X_OMFG_X_RAWR_X
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Angelic Princess Marie
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 18, 2009 @ 04:59pm
You are extremely talented. You need to have a book written, with your poems. You are truly special and will make your girlfriend - then, your wife - very special. For you are a very special person. Thank you, for the opportunity to read such poetry.


commentCommented on: Wed May 13, 2009 @ 04:24pm
Wow.. I can't put it into words how amazing this poem is. After this one, I'm reading them all! Bravo~ ^ ^



Blair Ezerain
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A stellar star
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 25, 2009 @ 12:22am
Awwwwh ! You made me cry... emo That was an amazing poem. Great rhyming too.


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 06, 2010 @ 09:50am
heart heart heart arrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i love that porem



shannon989
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