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HEY PPL!!! THIS IS A POEM I WROTE IN SCIENCE CLASS..I WAS REALLY BORED...MY FRENDS SAY ITS REALLY SAD..TELL ME WUT U THINK OF IT PLZ..COMMENT 2 IF U WANNA...I DONT CARE....SOO...UHH...HERE IT IS!!!!

Awaken

Have you ever seen through my eyes.
Clearly sad from everything going around.
I dont understand.
What is happening?
Why is this happening?
Has the world turned its back on me...
Or have I turned my back on the world?
Should I turn away and ignore it...
Or should I try to face it and make it better?
I need help.
Nobodys around.
Who will help me?
I want help.
Please....
Im dying...
Please....
I guess i'll go now...
I dont know where I'll go.
I guess I'll just wander around the ashes.
Never to be thought of.
Never to be spoken of.
I guess this is the end.
Never to awaken.

That is the end..if anyone has any better titles...plz tell me..i was desperate and it was the only thing i could think of...






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.ChickeN.McNuggetS.
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 01:59am
thats a really good poem..i'm impressed..i love it..its awsome..you should really write more.. mrgreen


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 03:00am
thats really good sweet job



nobody544
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Dead Queen
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 05:20am
Bot poems I've read thus far are really good. I'm muchly impressed. smile


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