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Meandering thoughts
Just random thoughts
Innocence, scorched in flame,
Rooted in the ashes of this game.
Embers aglow as the life still flows,
Mared and crippled yet she knows
Everything runs its course.

Mistakes were made,
Blank stares yet to fade.
Egos crushed under foot,
Realization is still moot
years of pain and sorrow take their toll.

Open wounds yet to heal,
Usless words kept at heel.
Remembering terrors that should never have been,
Perhaps they remain sight unseen
Ageless in our memories.

In time they fade,
Nearly by a shade.
Reaching out to find,
Just the right kind
Happiness and balance can still be found.






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Israfel85
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 19, 2007 @ 09:46am
I think it is a beautiful poem, reminded me of my last one a lot. I think you too has what it takes to write good poetry. Good poetry comes from writing what is in your heart. I am very proud of your effort, and I would love to see more of it in the future to come.

Great job biggrin


commentCommented on: Thu Feb 08, 2007 @ 03:21am
heart wow! This is beautiful Cat! I didnt know you could write poetry so well! You truly have a talent sis! Keep up the good work! I send "Kudos" to you! Bye! your friend, Purplestar27 aka C.S. smile



Purplestar27
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Sweetlizzy
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commentCommented on: Mon May 14, 2007 @ 03:50pm
Wow This is a real good poem.


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