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I get bored in class so i either draw or write a poem
Heres a poem i made up cus i was bored in school

Walking upon my dreams,
All I see is a desolate land.
With nothing to seek
No destination to go to
No one to love to keep me going
I slowly fall backwards,
To just drift away in this nightmare.
Then I gazed upon a bright light,
A falling star that had appeared.
A spark of hope opened in my heart,
As I saw a beautiful girl descend upon the heavens of my dream.
To find that, that girl was you,
The girl I dearly love.






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davey_havoks#1fan
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 23, 2007 @ 12:26am
wow....tht is really good for a random poem when u were bored in school.lol.anywayz how are you?


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 23, 2007 @ 03:10am
Rodney you freakn' poet =]
-poke-
I know who thee girl is
-poke-



erican7373
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VK Saiko
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 12:16am
crying omfg.....Ur really an amazing writer/poet...it was......i loved it...thats all i can say ....no words can describe how much...feeeling is in wat u wrote...i loved it!and....now....im crying... crying I really like them both..hope u make more!^.^ biggrin

Eternity22


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