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Hohenheim of Darkness
The Three Words.
Three words that I can't bring myself to believe.
Less then ten letters in total, yet the value of them, priceless.
Men have killed for the words; women, work for them.
They're international words that hold the same meaning.
To some, it's a lie.
But to others, it's their word.
The human race has yearned to hear the words.
Yet, I deny them, and everything they stand for.
I refuse any claims of anyone saying the longed-for words to me.
And it hurts you.

But what you don't see is that those words...
...Which I say with my heart and soul attached...
Bounce right off me,
Like rock and rubber.
Those words are forbidden to enter my mind.
The meaning, shot down as soon as it comes close to my heart.

The reasoning behind it?
Unknown.

What I do know, is that no one has said the sacred words to me.
With the exception of family.
No one has meant it in a bonding way.

It should be a heartwarming experience,
Yet it's the opposite.

How long will it take?
How much will you have you endure?
Until the words finally reach me, and send me to my paradise.


((Meh, horrible writing, I know. It's my first... writing? Meh, anyway. No one will read this anyway, because no one reads my journal, but if you are, by chance, I hope you enjoyed.))





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    edward_elric_fan_1
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    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 07:55pm
    sad i said it to u.....


    commentCommented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 03:25am
    I enjoyed it!
    >.e Because I can relate to it.
    Just.
    Yeah.
    It's so true, unforunatly. =/



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    Kenzisa Blazestone
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    commentCommented on: Tue May 15, 2007 @ 11:20pm
    O.o Teh hell you talking about!? This is awesome!!!!!!


    commentCommented on: Thu Jun 14, 2007 @ 03:12am
    This is nowhere near bad at all.
    If that's really your first piece of poetry or writing or what ever you'd prefer to call it, then you should expect more well written pieces of writing to follow. =)


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    Mannequin_Masquerade
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    Rayuku
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 08:28pm
    thas pretty good. and all so true. nice to see your vocab going to good use instead of biting sarcasm


    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 08:01am
    >>' I had no idea so many people liked this. xD Looking back on it, I can't believe this came from me xD

    Though, the truth of the writing has long since come and passed. The words that seemed forbidden for me, became mine after long, hard work, only to be ripped away like a pearl from its clam.

    So yea. Glad everyone enjoyed it ^^ I would write more if more things had an emotional effect on me.



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    Koreancutie91
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    commentCommented on: Sat Sep 01, 2007 @ 10:44pm
    Now that we're together
    I'll say these words forever
    I never want to hear you say
    That no one has said those forbidden words.
    Family doesn't count
    That's not what true love's about
    And I'll say it again and again and again...
    I LOVE YOU.
    Maybe your heart is riddled with holes and yet
    I'll be the one to sew them all closed!
    I'll kiss your lips so tenderly
    Now don't tell me that you don't want to be with me!
    Cuz' I LOVE YOU!

    Liam...I hope you understand what this song is saying because you're such a good kid and boyfriend to me and I hope you understand that I will NEVER leave your side unless you want me to go... sad but I hope you never say that because I don't like to be alone... crying


    commentCommented on: Mon Sep 03, 2007 @ 06:03am
    *hugs him too tight;his brains pop out* Oh s**t...sorry Liam!



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