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I found this poem I really like, It's good!

Here's what it is:



*Music* *shows a huge tower clock thing in a scary night
(It starts with fun) *zooming out till the world shows*
Fun things, I don't know why, it doesn't even matter how hard you cry *zooming out till the whole world shows*
Keep that in mind, I desgined this rythm to show what's mine *world shows*
(All I love..) *a picture of a teddy bear pops up*
Friendship is a valuable thing *Zooms in on teddy bear*
Watch it fly by as the oven dings *shows a picture of a oven*
Watch it as it burns the little stuffed friend away *shows the teddy bear being placed in the oven*
The click ticks his life away* *still showing the bear being put in the oven*
(It's so unreal) *still showing*
Didn't look out below *shows brother stealing teddy bear*
You've already watched the rabbit go out the window *shows brother taking stuffed bunny in the past and throwing it out the window into the pool*
Trying to hold on, but didn't even know *shows two scenes where you're watching the bear burn in oven and your bro throwing bunny*
Wasted it all just *same thing*
(To watch you goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!) *same thing*
I kept everything inside and even though I tried *shows little boy trying not to cry*
It all fell apart *bursts into tears*
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time.. *shoes a picture the little boy is holding up of him huging the teddy bear as he's crying*

I TRIED SO HARD! AND GOT SO FAR!!! *Shows boy trying to reach for the teddy bear*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER!!! *Shows big brother slam the oven door thing closed*
I HAD TO FALL, TO LOSE IT ALL!!! *Shows little boy falling the chair he was using to reach for the oven*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER-EEERRR-RRRR!!! *Shows boy crying again*

Fun things, I don't know why *shows burning teddy bear and the rabbit in two different scenes*
It doesn't even matter how hard you cry *shows boy crying*
Keep that in mind, I desgined this rythm to show what's mine *shows collection of stuffed animals*
In spite of the way you were mocking me *shows older bro laughing at boy*
Acting like I was part of you're poverty *shows ant farm that bro has in his room which he named Poverty Farm*
Remembering all the times you fought with me *shows bro killing all the stuffed animals*
Yet I'm still suprised it got so far *shows big bro pulling the burned bear out of oven with oven mitts*
Things aren't the way they were before *shows little boy in room dressing up like he's ready for war*
You wouldn't even recognize me anymore *shows lil' boy puttin on helmet*
Not that you knew me back then, but it all comes back to me *shows lil' boy grabbing a plastic sword*
(Watch you Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!) *shows little boy running out of his room, screaming a gay battlecry*
You kept everything inside even thought I tried, it all fell apart, what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time.. *still showin it*

I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR!!! *Shows boy charging at his bro*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER!!!! I HAD TO FALL, TO LOSE IT ALL!!! *Shows big bro take the blows of the plastic as i nothing happened then grab the plastic (not by the handle :O) and push lil' boy down*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTERR-ERRR-ERRR!!!! *Boy cries again*

I've put my trust in you *flashback: shows boy asking the bear to promise he'll never die like the last teddy*
Pushed as far as I can go *shows him stuffing the teddy bear into his suit case so the big bro won't find him -End of Flashback-*
From all this, there's only one thing you should knoooooooow *shows the ashes of the now dead teddy bear*

I'VE PUT MY TRUST IN YOU! PUSHED AS FAR AS I CAN GO! FROM ALL THIS!! THERE'S ONLY ONE THING YOU SHOULD KNOOOOOOOWWW!!!! *Shows boy crying as he looks at teddy bear ashes as they appeared upside down since he's stil on the floor and s**t from his bro knocking him down*

I TRIED SO HARD!!! AND GOT SO FAR!!! *Boy gets up again*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER!!! *Boy picks up plastic sword which big bro threw onto the floor*
I HAD TO FALL, TO LOSE IT ALL!!! *Shows boy fall, and get back up again and hit his bro with the plastic again*
BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER!!! *Shows mom get home and grounds the boy*
*music*


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