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Lootzoot
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story 4 school Nancy smith and Dark_moon_devil are real
Walking down a dark street, Jay, a thirteen-year-old kid with green hair, green eyes, 120 pounds, and he is five feet five inches. He stops under a streetlight and looks around wondering where his friends were. He told them to wait for him at the streetlight, but he did not see any of them around. As he looks over his shoulder he sees someone familiar.

He sees Nancy, a thirteen-year-old girl with gray hair, blue eyes, 100 lbs, and is 5 feet tall, running down the street towards him, waving happy to see him. They hadn�t seen each other in along time. He smiles and gives her a hug. He looks over Nancy�s shoulder to see Honey, Jay�s girlfriend, as beautiful as always. He blushes as Honey walks over and kisses him on the cheek. �I have not seen you in so long my beauty�; He says smiling with the blush gone. After welcoming them both he tells them why he asked them here.

�I need help on a project that I am working on�, he says looking at the both of them. �It will take a lot out of both of you but I know you can do it.�

Nancy smiles �Sure what is the project?�

Jay looks at the ground wondering if this was such a good idea. �I want us to enter a tournament. I need to destroy someone very badly�, He says with a definite sound of hatred in his voice.

Honey and Nancy nod in agreement and they all walk to Jay�s house to rest before the tournament.

They get up and get ready. Jay gets his weapons ready with the pitchfork, he thought he would need it. Nancy and Honey stretched for their weapons. They eat a light breakfast and walk down the street to the huge coliseum at the end of the block. They enter and find the most beautiful entrance room. Walking to the desk in the front, Jay asks where they could sign up for the tournament.

�Right here sir�, the lady at the desk says as she hands over a few papers for them to sign. �These forms tell that �The King Corp.� will not be responsible for any injuries or casualties that may take place in this tournament.�

Jay looks at Honey and Nancy and they both nod and sign the papers.

�Thank you, the ladies locker rooms are to the left and the men�s to the right. When you are beaten in the match you may go and watch the fighting from the special stands above.�

�See you later guys.� Jay says as he walks to the men�s locker room. When he got inside he found lots of men ready to fight. It was loud and he tried to concentrate on his goal. He had to destroy her for what she had done to him.

Honey decided to leave the day of the tournament and Jay figured out that she was cheating on him from a note she left him. He walked the streets alone wishing that Honey would come back to him. He knew that she would never come back for a long while. He decided to go to the market and turned down different streets before getting there.

Looking at all the stalls as he passed, he buys a few fruits that looked very tasty. They reminded him of Honey and her soft wonderful skin. He turns around to quickly and bumps into someone knocking her over.

�I am so sorry�� a quiet voice says as a woman wearing a hood begins to pick up her stuff that was dropped on the ground.

�I am the one that should be sorry.� Jay says as he helps her pick up her things. There was something about this woman that made him feel much better about Honey being gone.

�Jayphantomphoenix, please report to the arena�, A voice says over the speaker. It snaps him out of his memories and he stands up realizing that almost half of the men were already gone. He walks to the arena doors and opens them. He shields his eyes from the bright light as he steps out into the arena.

�GO JAY!� a voice screams from the bleachers above. Looking up Jay sees that Nancy was already out of the tournament. One of her arms was broken, but other then that she looked fine.

Jay walked up to the arena and looked at his opponent straight in the eye. The other opponent looked stronger but Jay had no doubts. Jay knew he was going to win.

�On the right we have Jayphantomphoenix, and on the left we have The Exterminator.� �First one to die, give up, or go out of the arena loses.� �1,2,3 Begin�, said the announcer.

Jay jumped in the air and took out his pitchfork and tried to stab his opponent. The Exterminator grabbed the pitchfork and threw jay across the arena almost falling out. He got back up and charged at him again only this time he teleported behind him. �Whoa I didn�t know that I could do that�, said Jay.

�Huh�, said Nancy and The Exterminator?

Jay stabbed him in the back and there was a spark. �What, a robot�, said Jay, �Ugh, hey this is no fair.

�Oh well you�ll live�, said The Exterminator,����� �Oh wait you won�t ha ha ha ha ha� He starts to twitch and fall down. Then you see Jay holding his pitchfork with a bunch of wires on the tip.

�I guess I win�, said Jay with a smirk on his face. The crowd cheered and Nancy jumped up and almost fell off the bleachers.

Jay sensed a strange feeling and ran off, and Nancy followed. He met up with Nancy and she followed him. He found the strange girl from before. He asked her what her name was, but she just ran off with no reason. He tried to follow her, but Nancy fell and he helped her. �Ugh, she got away,� said Jay.

�Jayphantomphoenix please report for round two of the tournament�, said the loud speaker. He went to the arena doubting that he would see the mystery girl again.

After the second battle, that he won, he thought about the mystery girl and heard a different name being called for battle. He rushed over to the arena and saw the mystery girl fighting her name was Devil. She had red hair, red eyes, 110 lbs, and is about five feet and two inches.

She beat him in 30 seconds flat, every ones eyes popped out of their heads. No one could believe what just happened. She walked off slowly and put back on her hood. She walked into the market place and looked at things to buy.

Jay and Nancy follow her and wanted to talk but she kept on running away. Nancy stayed behind this time because she might have slowed down Jay. Jay ran as fast as she could, but then he remembered that he could teleport. He teleported in front of her and grabbed her trying to be careful not to hurt her or himself.

�Leave me alone�, said Devil, �I want to be alone�. Her hood falls off and he sees her.

�You, it was you that killed my dad. I�I�I will never forgive you for this�, said Jay. He teleports to the arena trying not to think of her, but he couldn�t.

Jay�s next three battles went great, and so did Devils.

Jay�s next opponent was big, and Jay didn�t know who he was. Jay looked over his shoulder and saw Honey. He now knew who the he was, because Honey was calling the big guy lovey gushy names.

�So you�re the Jay I�ve heard so much about�, said the mystery man.

�Yeah, so what�s your name huh�? Said Jay.

�My name, you want to know my name�, said the mystery man, �my name is Monster. Honey gave me that name and I wouldn�t trade it for the world�, he said while blowing a kiss to Honey.

�1,2,3 begin�, said the announcer.

Jay charged towards him and said some magic words and a big beam of blue light hit Monster in the stomach and he fell down. �Well I think that was a bit too easy�, said Jay, �huh, what the, how could you get up after that�?

�Jay� Jay� Jay� never underestimate me, I am you�re worst nightmare�. Said Monster

�My only nightmare was Honey and I�m never going to go back to her�, said Jay, �actually she was more of a monster than you. Have you ever heard her snore�?

�I�m gonna make you eat those words�. Said monster.

�No thanks I had a large lunch�. Said Jay.

�Oh a wise guy, eh�? Said Monster, �Well I guess you weren�t too wise to join this tournament because I�m gonna beat you so bad�.

Jay pulls out his pitchfork and stabs him in the back and moves his pitchfork around inside of his back. �So am I wise now�? Said Jay.

�Aaaaaagggggggghhhhhhh�. Said Monster.

Jay throws him and he flings off the pitchfork and out of the ring. �I win,� said Jay.

Jay won his next match and the finals were up. He wondered whom his last match was against. But he had a hunch it was Devil, but now people call her �The Master�. Nancy walked up to him and asked him if he was ok. He wasn�t sure, he wondered if Devil was really the one who killed his dad? The final match was tomorrow, so he and Nancy rented a room in a hotel for the night. He wondered if he could win the match tomorrow, or will he lose everything, even his life like his dad did? He wanted to get revenge so bad; he only got six hours of sleep that night.

When he woke up, Nancy was eating a small breakfast. Jay was eating a large one. He had cereal, milk, three slices of toast with butter, and waffles. Nancy was eating a half of a bowl of cereal.

This was it; they were finally announcing the finalists. �Jayphantomphoenix and Darkmoondevil report to the arena for the final battle�, Said the announcer.

Jay walked in first and stood there waiting for Devil to show up. He hoped she did so he could beat her. She walked in and the room grew silent. She took off her hood and every one stared.
�1,2,3 begin�, said the announcer.

Jay charged towards her, but she just stood there. He goes to stab her with the pitchfork but he misses.

�She is in the same spot how did I miss her�? Said Jay. He pokes her �Hey, it�s a hologram. How did she do that�?


�It�s a spell you should have learned years ago by your d�� she said, �oh wait you couldn�t of, he�s gone.�

�I�ll make you pay for saying that�, Jay said. He lunges his pitchfork with a spell at her and it stabs her in the stomach and blood splatters everywhere.

She falls down with the pitchfork in her stomach. Jay pulls out the pitchfork, sits, and looks at her. �It�s over, it�s finally over�, said Jay.

She looks up and says, �This isn�t over��. Jay turns around to look at Devil. Devil says �Not by a long shot�. Then she fell back down and she starts to foam from the mouth.

Nancy stands up and starts to cheer and clap, every one else in the crowd started to cheer and clap. Nancy said, �go Jay, you rock, wooooohooooooo�.

Jay and Nancy walk home and Jay takes a shower to wash off the blood. He senses that Devil is still out there somewhere. �I just hope it�s over, I just hope�, whispers Jay.





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Re-Used Tampon
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comment Commented on: Sun Jun 19, 2005 @ 09:12pm
Dude, that was SO long! Man, one word of advise Keep It Short! I wouldnt have read it, besides the fact that you wanted me too [hee hee]. It was an Okay story, but it got kinda confusing because at first you typed that Honey and Nancy came to the "He looks over Nancy�s shoulder to see Honey, Jay�s girlfriend, as beautiful as always. He blushes as Honey walks over and kisses him on the cheek. �I have not seen you in so long my beauty�" that got me confused. but all in all, cant wait for the next story! wink


comment Commented on: Thu Jun 23, 2005 @ 02:25am
thank you your 2 kind



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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 24, 2005 @ 05:14pm
I know! But it aint the truth. twisted


comment Commented on: Sun Jun 26, 2005 @ 07:37pm
hey, jake, whats up?



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Lootzoot
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 29, 2005 @ 03:30pm
lol


comment Commented on: Thu Sep 01, 2011 @ 06:52pm
awesome bro! u n me we hav creative imaginations!!!



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