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Lost Love We used to sit under this tree And watch as the sun would set Crying tears over you Now all alone I watch As the moon rises Its light no longer fills me with joy Only sad memories of when we were young As I held your hand the sun would weep for us Crying over our sweet love But now that is no more Our love lay shattered on the floor Your face still hunts me here I try to wash away your love But it has stained my heart I wish to kiss your lips And dance with your hips But you are just a ghost to me Just a bad memory

Posted by: Ryoichi Shiro Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 05:30am

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Commented on: Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 05:35am


	cries delicate tears beautiful ;-; sniff sniff sniff

Commented on: Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 01:16pm


	That's a really really awesome poem you've got there. Perhaps even made me tear up a little. (Actually, you can take out the perhaps, heh.) I'm glad you were finally able to write something, and I think this poem is extraordinarily written. Keep up the amazing work.

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Commented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 02:16am


	Wow xeru, its truley beautiful-x =']

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