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Poem #6 ~Rejection~
i havent looked over this poem so it might be different then the others

Your words pierce my heart like the sharpest knives
I show no sorrow,
But inside my soul weeps
I say I understand,
But inside I don't
I turn and start to walk away
But I lose control
Tears swell in my eyes and I stop
A hand is set on my shoulder,
Your hand
Eyes filled with worry,
I turn to face you, my eyes filled with tears
You lean forward, and we kiss...
But then I wake, alone in a dark room
My soul still weeps over what I had dreamt
But my heart is strong, even with the stitches that hold it together






User Comments: [5]
comicfan92
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Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 12:25am


That. Was. Deep. It made me cry.


Hersheydudette
Community Member





Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 01:08am


Wowsers. This one's one of the best ones I'd say.


Wraith092
Community Member





Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 01:54am


wow... sounds like one of my dreams (when i remember them) ... ... i love the poem! it is the best i have seen from you! heart blaugh


charshu
Community Member





Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 06:10pm


i agree with everyone! one of ur best! i love it! but it is sad still........ crying very emotional *sniffles* heart heart heart love it!


hopeless dreams 2
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Sat Apr 07, 2007 @ 05:46pm


brovoe that was the best one i have read keep it up and you might be a really good poet


User Comments: [5]
 
 
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