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illusion
Contemplating phrases,
mixed in my own words,
filling caged inside,
walking a path with many lost souls,
trying to find the light.

My heart is throbbing,
blood seeping through,
I cry bacl tears,
trying to escape my nightmares.

Living in this world,
filled with delusions,
people dieing,
children crying,
these nightmares haunt me.

Felling do isolated,
trapped in this vortex of terror,
struggling to get out,
grasping hold to what is left.

Thoughts rampaging through my head,
tossing and turning,
In this a deep sleep,
of a never ending illusion.

Emotion mixed,
I weep for help,
desprete to wake up,
falling deeper into this dark illusion.

waking up,
with a scream,
relizing,
It was just an illusion in my mind.






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Wario_man
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 15, 2007 @ 01:43am
Coolness! Another poem I can parody perhaps?


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 15, 2007 @ 03:26am
WOW great poem i loved it
ur really good and again i gotta say good use with the big words



i love my girl Almedina
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Ravens_Inner_Soul
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 15, 2007 @ 04:42pm
^.^ thanx

and good luck wario


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 12:04am
Great poem! I hope it's not true. sad
It's a bit dark but all good poems are. I liked it



Elie101_forever
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