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A poem of mine
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The long dark of despair

I feel a bit down,
I feel a bit low.
I feel like slashing my wrists...
I just want a go.

I feel the blade,
I feel the pain.
I scream and shout,
And run out in the rain.

I Hide in a tunnel,
I hide in my self.
No one can find me...
I fear for my health.

I am alone.
I fell so cold.
I'm turning to ice...
I know what i've sold

There goes my soul,
There goes my heart,
There goes life.
I'm alone in the dark...


well was it good, bad, depressing what i want to know oh and btw i will add more of these if you would like.






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Princessinblue301
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 10:53pm
its great


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 11:27pm
thanx get your mates to look at it



james301
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Budochou
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commentCommented on: Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 02:11pm
I liked it a lot.... it was sad, very sad. And lonely.... makes me want to hug you


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 03:43pm
i like it is that relly how yu feel? its sad but very good post more =]



xll_dEmOn_gUrL_llx
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james301
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commentCommented on: Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 05:53pm
god thats 4 corkscrewws of the high board from you 2 lol and sure oh and btw i dont always fell like this just time to time i do


commentCommented on: Wed May 16, 2007 @ 08:04pm
i dont like help i like doing it on my own



james301
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