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Fallen Angels

Rahai and Azura, two fallen angels. When they start to fight eachother for a girl their conflict turns into a bloody mess....


Rahai faced off with Azura, both equally matched, neither backing down.Azura bore signs of a brutal beating,Rahia's arm was hanging by only a few tendons.Both their lives had changed when the council of angels banished them, now they were locked in a bitter conflict that had destroyed a once great friendship.
As Rahai stood their with his blade outstretched Azura summoned a dragon. Just as the dragon was summoned Rahai flew up then backwards.
Suddenly the dragon roared and lunged at him.
Azura watched as his dragon lunged his counterpart. He smiled as Rahia's arm fell to the ground, and thought that this fight was over and he was the victor.But Rahia will to live was stronger then he thought.
Now the girl who they were fighting over looked normal. But they both saw amazing beauty in her. She only knew the Rahai had feelings for her so she was very surprised when she found out that Azura liked her also.
Rahai was scared when the dragon lunged, so scared he dropped his last line of defense, his blade.Defenceless and scared senseless he flew higher hoping the council would take pity and help him. But when the finally did notice him they looked away as they had many times before to other fallen angels.
Azura stood waiting for his dragon to return with his foes lifeless body, sadly for him he didn't hear or feel the suppressed pistol behind his skull.
Just as Rahai was about to be eaten alive the dragon vanished,he looked down and saw the cause, Azura was dead on the pavement killed by the very person they had been fighting over.
As Rahai landed he was was swarmed by people all of them congratulating him on his victory. Everyone except the girl, she stood over Azura's lifeless corpse weeping. As he walked to her and wrapped her in a one armed hug, she looked into his eyes and saw something she had not been expecting, remorse he then surprised her even more by saying "He was a good friend I shall miss him."
As they stood over Azura the council members descended the took the corpse of the fallen and took him back to their halls. now post your comments and please dont leave comments like "this is trash" or anything cause i worked hard on this!





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